Global Catastrophe: I Drive a Bus in the Apocalypse

I quite like watching this kind of thing, where the protagonist and two or three female protagonists are trying to survive. Stop trying to control the factions. It's really upsetting to watch.

You bus, she is not serious. Does it waste gas?

Why do you write the same thing as licking*?

Personally, I hate cigarettes. The author writes no less than three or four sentences about the protagonist smoking. The number of words is only 1. 2. In the apocalypse, who would collect a bunch of unsatisfactory supplies (collecting only a little would be fine, but I read dozens of chapters, and there was smoke in almost every chapter) and who would be deceived. 3. Even if your author is a long-time smoker, you don't have to write all the novels about smoking. . . Nowadays, the youngest readers of novels are about ten years old (people still think that cigarettes are a good thing? What should I do if I smoke them out of curiosity? There really are such fools). My brother started smoking for less than half a month (later found out) because others said smoking was good and his friends were curious about it. Now that he has quit smoking for five years, he is getting better and better. . . . . So from the beginning, I hate this kind of thing that brings bad people to talk about cigarettes.

Especially in Chapter 54, when everyone hugged another one, you still have to hug two others. Can't you write it more forcefully if it's not licking*?

Doesn't the author know that female protagonists are taboo in novels?

The author writes no less than three or four sentences about the protagonist smoking in one page. The number of words is 1. 2. In the apocalypse, who would collect a bunch of supplies that are not enough to fill the stomach (it's okay to collect a little, but I read almost sixty chapters, and there is smoke in almost every chapter) and who will be deceived. 3. Even if your author is a long-time smoker, you don't have to write all the novels about smoking. Nowadays, the youngest readers of novels are about ten years old (I wonder what I would do if I smoked it, there really are such fools). My brother was curious because a friend gave it to him, so he started smoking it for less than half a month (later I found out), and now he has quit smoking for five years, and the more he quits, the more addicted he is. . . . .

Do you have to make the protagonist such an idiot? Judging from a person's appearance, no matter what, it is impossible to mistake a beautiful girl in her twenties for someone in her forties or fifties, right?

What kind of thing is written? Chapter 1, Chapter 2. I am confused. I wonder if the author has a bad mind. What kind of logic can be written?

By the way, don't write about the protagonist building up his power, I'm really tired of it.