I Made You Go to Jail, but I Didn't Make You a Big Brother.

It is too slow to warm up, there are too few defeat CG parts, and Pokémon battle training is too "urban", which is a bit tasteless.

Has the author ever had a job? How do you know so much slang?

Can the author hurry up and write about the Supreme Divinity and the Conquering Demonic Void Emperor and the Yellow-Clad Jester?

Are you kidding me? The reincarnated person changes his surname but not his name. Tushan Rongrong, the second head of Tushan, knows better than anyone. How could he think that the protagonist is the reincarnation of Dongfang Yue Yue?

Kaido physically surpasses Boros? You can really talk nonsense

This level system is too simple. I laughed when I saw Star Yao.

. . . Sketch with a brush. . Is it really possible?

It wouldn't be a big problem if this book was written about giving away girls in the middle and later stages. As a person who just got a golden finger, who would not accept girls in the early stage? There are so many in the later stage that it's okay. I'll give it away in the early stage. Isn't this what I'm looking for? Either don't write about girls or just accept them.

You disbanded all the sects. If Feng Qingyang didn't do it, you really thought you would be invincible.

Except for people with really low emotional intelligence, I feel that there are no straight men at all. Either they don't like you and are not interested in you, or they are deliberately pretending to be straight. The protagonist's straight-male plot in the article is very fake, but the author really wants to portray a straight man. It seems too forced and embarrassing.

Where did Chapter 49 go? I don't know how to drive fast, right?

The gun was taken away and he didn't do anything? No way, after just seeing her a few times, she can make this policewoman ignore the regulations? Doesn't this description make this policewoman look brainless? Just riding a horse is outrageous. (I forgot which chapter, but it does say that the protagonist took everything from the policewoman, and only returned five after taking six. The policewoman also realized that the gun was not returned, but she picked up the walkie-talkie without saying anything. What she was thinking was not clearly written)

Commentary on Chapter 15: Crazy Spreading Dog Food written by Eternal Brother Feng, "I put you in jail, but didn't let you be a big brother".

Chapter 36: This is the finger of the boss of your Blue Dragon Society, Chapter 36: "I put you in jail, but I didn't let you be a big brother" written by Eternal Brother Feng.

For those of you who didn't break into Nantianmen, which version of Journey to the West did you read?

Does anyone know where the original author is?

A good hand, a poor hand*.

Change the wording on the third page of Chapter 16 and change it to Liu.