Speak Your Mind, Disciple. I Promise I Won't Hit You!

One pill can transform the immortal into the Immortal Realm. It is still a top-grade pill. The protagonist took five pills to advance from the early stage of the Golden Pill to the late stage of the Nascent Soul. Five pills only raised him to one and a half major realms? Or is it a realm like the Golden Elixir Nascent Soul, which is thousands of miles away from the Immortal Realm? What kind of foundation is this? Still innate? First your sister's God!

The writing is good, the plot is good, but the relationship between the characters is handled thoroughly. I have been writing about the interaction with the junior sister, and the ending is the master, and uses the collapse of combat power as the reason for the ending, but does not explain the emotional line at all, and there is no foreshadowing at all, just like Wei Xiaobao in The Deer and the Cauldron seduced seven wives and ended up with Kangxi.

During the fight between Xianxiu and Xianxiu, a bunch of Nascent Soul stagers were punching and kicking each other, and the maximum damage range was not at the level of the Destruction Valley. Also, the protagonist can only break through the innate god transformation to have a range of one kilometer of consciousness mapping. Isn't the ordinary god transformation far less than one kilometer... Why does it feel like he is just a highly martial world view and combat power in the skin of a "fairy knight"? It may even be worse. After all, some high-level martial arts worlds set the golden elixir to be in the realm of "earth gods and immortals". Not to mention moving mountains and reclaiming seas, but it is no problem to be a small nuclear bomb. You remind me of those "Marvel" movies I used to watch, each one with some weird and magical setting. What can destroy the world and the universe, and then when they fight, you punch me and I kick you. Not to mention casually exploding stars, you even have to hit a small fish with a basic A. It's really low...

The author is good and he understands the basics! You won't make a mistake just because you are right! Stop in time and like it!

But at least it's finished. It's much better than cutting it off. I think it's okay. It's a pretty good book.

Wu Yan made trouble for no apparent reason and wanted to kill the male protagonist. The male protagonist also pointed out his mistake in the martial arts like a stick and saved his life. I have never seen anyone licking like this. It doesn't matter if you are licking a woman, you are also licking a man.

Kick me when the author opens a new book

The first part of the book was quite good. Although it fell apart a bit at the end and it was finished quickly, it was much better than those who hire ghostwriters to earn subscriptions. Are there any new books?

Is it worthy of us to finish it like this? Write a sequel!

A single piece of ammunition can turn a person into an immortal. How cheap is this immortality?