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How About the Evolution of Beast Control?
It's more exciting, just good-looking
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Is There Something Wrong with Feilu's Comment Mechanism?
No matter what the book is, all the reviews are 10 points. A total of 100 people commented and I gave 40 one-star ratings, all of which were still 10 points →_→
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Have You Ever Watched Tech Treasure Hunters?
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The body and writing are good, but she is a bit like a holy mother who is busy saving the world and protecting the villagers all day long.
The iron-clad Bingbing, the flowing water Sister Zhou and the silly little girl
I subscribed specifically to read the chapter about awakening abilities, but it turned out to be too bland and boring. The free-spirited warrior Sun God Nika finally awakens and you still hold back your laughter. It doesn't feel that way anymore, and you can't write about that exciting and exciting moment of awakening.
The subject matter is good, and I have some writing skills, but the writing style is too young. The author looks like a junior high school student. He repeats several adjectives over and over again, has typos from time to time, and the plot is unclear.
I find this way of writing quite attractive. But after dozens of chapters, I started to think, why should you help someone who has nothing to do with you for free?
If you don't be so hypocritical and directly become the king, you don't have to be so promiscuous.
Except for a few people who have pets written on them, they are all idiots with names.
I don't want to write it yet. If I don't write it, just say okay*
You can write well, why are there so few people?
In the second article, did the earth bear cub that was waiting for food eat the protagonist? Is the protagonist a good caretaker who goes to deliver a meal when someone else's bear cub is hungry? Then the protagonist Wan, the book ends
Is it necessary for the protagonist to recite the magic beast release skills one by one? ? ? ? ? ?
You think I haven't watched Ultraman Tiga, right?
Commentary on Chapter 15 of "The Emperor's Thief" written by "Beast Control: Picking up a Sacred Dragon Egg at the Beginning" by Please Come to Heaven.
It feels weird that they started to squirt each other as soon as they came here. This is very weird, especially when the pig's feet are assumed to be who they are now. The squirting speed is too fast. It always feels weird**
The writing is a mess and the beginning is so pretentious.
Can the author add more chapters? Too damn little!
Author, please calm down. There are a lot of sick sentences in the VIP chapter, which really affects your mood.
It's all typos. The author didn't graduate from elementary school.
The author is not a eunuch. Come on, support you and give me a reward.
Comments on Chapter 35 of "Da Qin: The Evolution System of Awakening Warriors at the Beginning" written by Banshee. It's so damn long-winded. I don't have time to accompany you. Chapter review.
About the book "Time Traveling to the Ape Tribe, Will the Orangutan Choose Me as the Boss?" Chapter 35 Go back? No kidding (first update) Chapter review.
About Chapter 61 of "National Games Cards: Xu Sheng in the Opening World, Crazy Joy in the Country" written by Fengxue Crayfish: The Bangzi Country is really a subsidiary state of the Dragon Kingdom! Get the golden character card! Chapter review.
Regarding Chapter 9 of "I Have the God-Level Clone Technique in Conan" written by a very frustrated young man, I'm sorry, I'm just going to stick with this one, please collect it and comment on the chapter.
Merit? Karma? Isn't this from prehistoric times?