Immortal Palace Live: Start as the Jade Emperor, Teammate Jiu Shu
仙宫直播：开局扮演玉帝，队友九叔
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- Completed
- Length
- 809k Words
- Subgenre
- Horror Thriller
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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309.3kFlowers
10.0 · 9.5kScore
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The Jade Emperor should at least be at the peak of the Saint. It's 20% at the beginning. The peak of Daluo shouldn't be too much. The main character is too weak, has no sense of existence, and does not have the majesty of the Jade Emperor. The Supreme of the Three Realms tells you to write nothing.
Written like this, are you a human? The Jade Emperor has been belittled by you, can our myth be changed by you? If you don't know how to write, don't write. You just want to make money. Get out of here.
The protagonist is a mascot and the one who can only ask Tathagata Buddha for help is the same person.
Update it soon, it's so good, if you dare to update ten chapters, I will marry my sister to you!
Just write your own one, and don't worry about other people. There will always be people who like it. If everyone writes a novel, it's impossible for no one to criticize what you wrote, okay? Just write your own
Don't you think it's weird to ask the Jade Emperor to rob a tomb?
Kavin has been stuck for 3 years, nb
The negative reviews are already in the tens of percent, and he is still a mortal with no cultivation, and has been making soy sauce.
Do you know what the Jade Emperor is? Do you know what an emperor is? When you played the Jade Emperor, you were not domineering at all. Can you get points for this? Is this like it? If you can't write, you can write about other people, not about Jade Emperor. No logical thinking at all. Simply the first one. When you wrote about Han Ba, you let her go, and you should at least deduct points in this regard. Because he will kill other people after he runs away. This will deduct merit. Even a Jade Emperor has been deducted from public morality. Shouldn't this be deducted?
The Jade Emperor is a quasi-sage, but at 30%, he is still a broiler?
! Whether it is the sky full of gods and Buddhas, or the great gods in fantasy novels. In the eyes of the author of Flying Donkey, they are all bitches! The author of Flying Donkey is so damn good at Shenjing Bing!
Do you dare to be more outrageous? Write an opening to play Tong Tian, a teammate?
The author is SB. If I have time to retreat for three years, I will synthesize good luck words ten times a month.
I seem to have seen the exact same plot before
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