
Exploring the Forbidden Land: Transforming into a Copy Ninja, Shocking Sister Zhang Qilin Baoer
禁地探秘:化身拷贝忍者,震惊张麒麟宝儿姐
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- Completed
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- 4.3M Words
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- Supernatural
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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He had a criminal record and even deliberately resurrected a bunch of male supporting characters. This plan was heard on the planet M78. There are also four excuses for being a filial son, taking tools, conquering the heroine, gathering faith, and taking care of the world. Let me analyze it for you. There are too many tool people in the world who have nothing to do with the female protagonist. The second female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist and gave up her obsession with the wife. The male protagonist even took off his pants and let go, resurrected his father and husband, and even gave him eternal life. Thirdly, among the resurrected male protagonists, the capable ones do not believe in or fear the male protagonists, while the incompetent male protagonists will not be accepted as dependents. Some of the male protagonists are still the original CP of the female protagonist. Fourthly, this story is half-baked. The heroines have nothing to do. Instead of letting them take care of the world and have something to do, they just sit around and watch? Shenyin? Four excuses are self-defeating
This kind of video posting to reward the protagonist for his transformation ability feels like a failure, and the protagonist is too greedy and looks annoying.
Seizing the future has not only become a joke, it can't even be looked at directly.
After reading a few pictures and reading the comments, let me summarize the problem. First of all, the plot of the forbidden area is a tomb robbery, which is a bit too much. You still have to deal with so many things when Zhang Qiling cleared the level in a matter of seconds. After reading what was said in the comment section, the author who wrote about Naruto has never understood it at all, so he probably knows that the rest is all nonsense! I also saw people saying that they were going to catch the Hokage, so just do it, and they wrote about their combat power to the point of collapse! There is no general framework, just write whatever comes to mind! In the future, I estimate that it will either be a prostitute, a eunuch, or someone who will make up for it here and there, or I will write more and more outrageous things as I think of them! I've finished talking, who is in favor and who is against?
I saw that Emperor Rock King ate the horn here. There is something wrong with the author's thinking. You wrote it from God's perspective and you know what happened, so it doesn't matter. However, Walnut and Xiangling are not from God's perspective. They all thought that Emperor Rock King was dead. Then a god who had protected them for thousands of years was dead. When they saw Emperor Rock King's horn, they ate it happily instead of being angry. They wrote that they were worse than animals.
Don't even look at it. People who use Japanese, Korean, European and American role-playing games have not even posted it. First of all, it's just the feelings that I can't get past.
The other books I read have about twelve pages per chapter, but this one only has five or six pages. I wonder why I feel so numb just reading it with 300 chapters.
If you haven't watched Naruto, don't write blindly. I've only opened six doors. **Feng Baobao just learned the seventh door of Hirutora. He's really awesome.
Damn it, I'm speechless. Don't you know about forbidden women? I don't know, can I just read more and then write? Hey, I'm so speechless that I won't watch anymore...
The data is good, why is it missing?
In anime, this is one of the strengths of elves. For example, elves with high defense are only slightly higher than their opponents in the same level. This comparison is not data in the game. It is turn-based. Race values can only be stronger in certain aspects among elves of the same level.
Who are the beautiful country and the beautiful country?
You can still use chakra after being hit with 64 palms of Byakugan Bagua
Really, don't just write that someone is already trying their best. Your Kakashi acting skills are not yet full! Just write that Feng Baobao has done his best for you, so you plan to rely on only one Kakashi to write countless restricted areas? If this is not the case, what role will Feng Baobao have in the future? He went all out against one Kakashi, but he still had to explore some forbidden areas later. Of course, if you infinitely weaken the restricted area you want to write about, then just pretend that I didn't say that
Go ahead and write a romance. The male character is so aggrieved that the hero's bottom is almost being wiped out.
Gundam is romantic. Is it because Gundam is bad or because Eva doesn't smell good? Aren't these all good?
Chidori is Chidori, Raikiri is Raikiri
I was convinced. The physical fitness of the protagonist was even stronger than that of Zhu Long. You must know that the protagonist's performance at that time was only 90% and not 100%. If you compare it with the real Kakashi, if he didn't dodge or defend, he would be killed by a shuriken. After all, not everyone has the recovery ability of Senju Hashirama.
About the "Weird Quest: Playing as Kakashi, teaming up with Sister Zhang Qilingbaoer" written by the Mysterious Messenger Chapter 2 Playing as Hatake Kakashi! Chapter review.
Why is he the son of Ying Zheng again?
The plot is too weak, the protagonist does not fight for hegemony and supports an emperor, there are a lot of words, and it also specifically writes about the hidden sect, the Demon Sect, the Ghost Valley, etc. It would be better to include the Great Qin Dynasty and the Sui Dynasty, and the protagonist kills people to increase his internal strength. As a result, he kills hundreds of chapters to reach the early stage of the Grand Master.
It's best not to use your brain when reading this book, it's too poisonous
Sword Demon Aatrox, Desert Emperor, God King of the Hand of Noxus, Ruined King Foyego, Soul Lock Warden Thresh, the author should consider it, hey
The writing was too messy and I couldn't understand it.
When I saw the introduction and fpx, I clicked on the author. Sure enough, it was you. You love fpx so much.
Chidori and Raikiri are two ninjutsus! **Don't make any mistake, don't make fools of yourself if you haven't seen it, my Hokage** Now go learn the same thing from He Chao, you bitch.
Chidori and Raikiri are two ninjutsus, right?
If you don't understand, just ask. What is a ninja?
Do you know what the concept of a thousand-meter wave is? The most terrifying tsunami wave height at present is only more than 40 meters. You are talking about a thousand meters, right?
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