I Build the Great Qin Heaven in a Fantasy World

You have always been so handsome, like a banished immortal, don't you have any other words? With this writing style, any kind of person can write a novel. It doesn't matter how good your writing style is, at least give me a passing grade in Chinese!

This is a fantasy world, which means that the level of the world is high, and the level of the characters is also high. The lifespan will definitely increase with the higher the level of cultivation. Then the protagonist is said to be long live, long live, long live, long live... Well, this makes me very funny. It always makes me feel that the protagonist will die early.

They all live outside the city, and they even go out to greet them. Is there a city gate?

Explosive troops fight, explosive troops fight, from beginning to end, and the pace is too fast. A country is a country in a few days. I suggest the author that such articles must be slow in pace. The system, military, politics, culture, and economy must all develop together. If you only fight without defending, you will easily get visual fatigue.

A person who doesn't even have his own generals, and only knows how to deal with history, is it your country or someone else's country? Nothing original at all.

Isn't Zhang Han better than Zhao Yun?

I would like to ask if the names of the units summoned along with the generals will be changed in the future. Just like Zhao Yun's 10,000 cavalry, is it really appropriate for a cavalry under the command of a Qin general to call the Shu cavalry every day? If it hasn't been changed, I won't read it.

Wang Jian is at least a peerless person, are you even half a peerless person?

Zhao Yun is a famous general with great military exploits. Zhao Yun's abilities were described as superb in "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and he was ranked among the Five Tiger Generals. As everyone knows, there has never been a saying about the Five Tiger Generals in history. Zhao Yun has never been reused, and his official position is not as high as that of Wei Yang. He is a tragic hero!

Finally, there was a heroine. I wanted to know what the heroine was doing. I was speechless. I wasted so much money. I didn't want to watch it for a moment. **

First it was the 9 Chaos Saints, and then it was gone, **

We have summoned all the big names early, but what about the next few hundred?

Why don't the author help the country take off now? Don't make too big a deal when writing novels, and don't be afraid of tearing your ass off.

Zhao Yun is the top author of Zhang Hancai Half Step. What do you think? Just compare the record and can Zhao Yun compare with Zhang Han?

作者进宫了 去做内务府大总管

真心还不错，但是可以把场面搞大点，比如对军队的描写，交代的很模糊，有一些bug，比如打铁制造盔甲就是一个很需要时间的事

It seems that female immortals are called Yuanjun of such and such, but I have never heard of male immortals being called Yuanjun.

Comments on Chapter 058 How can you play like this in "Going to School Together: Starting from Military Training" written by Ultra Tuanzi.

This protagonist has a nouveau riche mentality in the early stage.