Nationwide Online Game: Eternal Summoning

I couldn't stand it after reading more than a dozen chapters, and it took me twelve years to read the book. Why are you so excited? None of the other summoners saw it, just you. Your skill talent is nothing more than the ability to upgrade for an unlimited time. Let's not talk about doubling your attributes by leveling up. Just say that your skill bonus is outrageous. It can actually increase your own attributes by 100%? Did you drink it? You can add other summoners as well, but the upgrade attribute is just doubled, so the attributes are not very low, right? Also, is it a thing that the duration of the summoned beast has a CD? Why are you so invincible? There is no need to look at it, there must be a fight by one person later.

Everything else is fine, but the national writers are ridiculous. Why don't you give it away for free? It's better to write about The Lone Ranger.

I thought I would summon a bunch of them and then use the human wave tactic, but in the end I only summoned a few.

Name your sister, "Orange with Fallen Leaves", is she the female author? If so, I can't pee even one piece

Wow, this number of words is amazing!

Although the author is not well-received, your plug-in is too ruthless. It is invincible even before it is put on the shelves. It's a bit dumbfounding.

You can put a real gun in it, which is awesome. Hehehehehe, it's my turn. Ordinary people, let's have fun. And he can hold a gun, and he can crush everything with just a light machine. In the early stage, he can be surpassed, which I didn't expect. Brainless. In reality, the more individual weapons of this kind, the more powerful they are.

It definitely counts as a cool article, but the premise is that several commanders are so strong and the commander doesn't care about pig's feet. Is the commander a fool and can he be the commander if he only wants this and that all the time? Pig's trotters are like a nanny who gives everything without asking for anything in return. It gives the impression that the commander has to count the money after selling pig's trotters. It's not a cool article. You're almost a god after level 10 and once you evolve, pig's feet haven't become a god yet. You've already created a god system.

At the beginning, the protagonist is so embarrassed, rolling her eyes and puckering her lips.

If your writing is not good, don't focus on dialogue and characterization, and focus on the plot.