People with Surgical Fruit Abilities in American Comics

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that the author is not good enough. Forget about the Holy Mother, I still don't have a sense of empathy. . The subject matter is blind.

I won't tell you how it was written. In Feilu, it is not good to write a fan fiction book in which the main character does not know the plot and the score is over 80%... I even said it was less. Who knows about the book in which the protagonist does not know the plot and the score is good?

It's true that it's extremely poisonous. If you follow the plot, the protagonist doesn't know the plot, and he still abuses the protagonist. I feel numb.

The story of this book is just like a sieve. There is nothing that should be there, and there is everything that shouldn't be there. The plot is dragging, and if you can't come up with a good plot, you limit the protagonist's power. If you limit the power, why give it to him? There are also prefaces that don't match the afterwords, and sometimes the style changes. The conversation was good at the beginning, but becomes messy at the end. The words are segmented, and the upper body and the lower body are separated, right? Does it take up more than one space for the number of words? And, lastly, don't there be follow-ups to many of the things that need to be brought out for the plot? Why don't you take it out? Water word count, right? OK, I'm done.

Another Virgin Mary

It's amazing. You can write like this at the age of 15. How can you let those zzs live?

This IP address doesn't work! Are there any in Hunan?

The author's setting of the plot is a bit retarded. If you don't read novels, watch movies, or watch animations, please find someone to show me.

There are so many flaws that I can't help but complain a few times. They all say that one is possessed by a monster and still cares about an illegitimate child. There are also demon king levels and top demon king levels. I am also drunk and there are many more that I won't mention. To be honest, I want to endure it and read it without using my brain. After all, I quite like the subject matter, but it is too logically confusing and long-winded.

I really don't know why there are so many holes in my brain.

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