
The Sword Travels the Way of Thunder and Lightning
剑行霹雳天之道
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 3.8M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 13d ago
- Source
- Faloo
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10.1 · 245.2kScore
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Fellow Taoists, hurry up and build a building. There will be more buildings for 100 buildings!
I feel like the protagonist is more capable than anyone else, and his skills and talents sound incredible. But when you fight against a named person, you basically have to do a few rounds of 50-50. This protagonist can't stand up to anyone, and he always feels like he's neglected the past few years. The protagonist has not improved as much as the written plot. It feels like Jiazi is like not using golden fingers.
I've been following it since the beginning, but now I feel it's not good to watch. It's good that Pili has a storyline, but the protagonist's appearance is too few. How long will it take you to become such a fool?
Before Yuan Xie Huang, the author, you were writing seriously, and the story was compact and organized. After Yuan Xie Huang, you started to write poems and feelings. Your subsequent stories can be completed in just a few chapters according to your previous writing method. Now it's just a chapter to meet and say a few words. If you want the word "water", just say it, I haven't read it for a day, I have read it for almost two months. If you continue to do this, who has so much money to pursue a book like yours?
Tsk tsk tsk, Mo Li Sao is an old scumbag. He has Qi Liao resentment, looking at Yu Linling, thinking about Lin Ruomei, looking forward to cutting Tianhong, and Cui Luohan is not clear, and even picked up the Ji Tian Qin Ji. Is it time for Yue Zhixi to be next? But she is a widow. Or is it too much fat?
The name of the protagonist is so annoying, just call it Mo Li. How sexy is it if you have to add something saucy? It makes me laugh every time I see this name
Another eunuch, the one who cheated was either a eunuch or a coward. He still had the nerve to ask for money. Damn it.
Chapter 400: One King of Hell, who is next? Why does this little plot take so long? Why does it take so much trouble for the protagonist, a near-god, to fight innately? Why was it given to the system at the beginning and now gone? Why do some insignificant plots take up so much of the main line? Where do you have the nerve to say that you can't persuade fellow Taoists to sincerely write a book?
I vomited. You copied the original work. This is too much. One world copied from the original plot and the protagonist said a few sentences is a reincarnation world. Not even a third of what you wrote is included. This is too exaggerated.
Pheloo is a high-yielding food crop. But, author, guess why the grain depots are filled with rice and wheat, but not Feilu? In the absence of cold storage in ancient times, could Feilu be stored for more than one year? In addition, light-planting flyloo... Author, have you heard of the Great Famine in Ireland?
There are so many chapter names that don't match the content, and the content is a bit lacking. Did the author split one chapter into three and uploaded it? There are too many chapters and the content is of poor quality, and they keep asking for flowers and a monthly pass! What shame do you have?
One thing is that the protagonist is not only incomparably handsome but also delicate and so on. Then he gets a golden finger and quickly becomes better and better. He has a temperament like a fairy. You, the protagonist is a fat man. . . . .
That black shadow is Dark Wing Fei Xiao. When did he guide the Six Kings to Open Heaven? He just wanted the Six Kings' hearts to open the passage to the Nine Wheels Heaven. With his little cultivation, he still guided the Six Kings to Open Heaven. One move from the King of Hell was enough to kill him. What are you bragging about?
The big holes in the original work require you to rack your brains to fix them. Mortals are punished by heaven for disobeying gods, and their luck drops to the lowest point, so they have to hide their strength and bide their time, otherwise it will be difficult to move forward. This statement is quite interesting. And no matter whether it is a page of books, Cang, or three innates, these rebels against the gods, after their natural sins, are still inferior to each other.
Every time I read the last chapter, it is repeated. What do you think? We really thought our money was brought by the strong wind! Let me start by saying that your writing is very good, but is it interesting to mess with people's mentality in this way? Always repeat, always repeat
In the midst of a dying illness, I sat up in shock, another short and feeble chapter.
God of the Six Realms is a bit too exaggerated
The protagonist can win anyone he fights, but he can't kill anyone he kills.
The plot is too slow, and the quality has also declined. The plots I want to watch are the plots of engaging in magic, fighting Baqi, overturning nothingness, and playing tricks with Qi Zong. According to your pace, it is probably a series within my lifetime!
This is so messed up, how do I turn off this automatic subscription, friends?
The author really put his heart into it at the beginning, but later it was completely original. The main plot is to change the fate of some characters according to the plot. Of course I like to watch this kind of thing, so I didn't say it. The protagonist is already half-way to becoming a god, but he is still making small fuss. The plot is too small. Look at the Jiutian Xuanzun brothers, a blood-dark man created a book that is close to the gods, the beginning of the devil The plot turns into a near god, and the protagonist needs to sacrifice. This ready-made plot can be plotted, but it remains passive, just like the original work. Accepting those small roles is not enough for Baqi to give him a slap in the face.
You are already a thousand times more energetic, so you don't have to worry about shooting a **** god casually. Even Shen Yong doesn't dare to be so cautious. Even Jianye's bragging king doesn't dare to brag like this.
Let's start relying on the ancient ss mythology. Those who come for the golden thunderbolt can be let go.
You can't even write about the plot of Yaqi Evil God during the Chinese New Year!
After chasing for so long and procrastinating, everyone felt uncomfortable, wanted to do it but couldn't let it go. Now it's better, and I can finally let it go.
Whatever the author's situation is, I'm worried because you went from never paying to read novels to paying to read novels. You ended up paying for it. Can you still work for such a short time? What do you want to do?
I only read the first ten chapters. The impression I have on him is that of an ordinary fairy novel covered in thunder skin. I'm really curious. Can an ordinary Taoist student's ten years of cultivation be redeemed for the Tao of Heaven? Even a wisp is not worth just this price. And can Xuanyuan Gong, a martial art that can be practiced by advanced Taoists, be comparable to the martial arts of the Way of Heaven? Not even suitable for carrying shoes, right? And when the protagonist is practicing swordsmanship, he jumps into the river to practice. Pili is also a world of high martial arts, right? You have the internal strength of a Jiazi, coupled with the martial arts of the Way of Heaven, you can only use the third level when you jump into the river to practice swordsmanship. Is your river the Jiuqu Yellow River? A Jiazi's inner strength was defeated by a river, and what you wrote is not even enough for a fairy novel.
Can you speed up your progress? You have written hundreds of chapters for the Six Kings, but you must not have two or three thousand chapters for the God War.
You wrote the origin of one of the Three Religions as a god-level item. I remember correctly that it was just an item that records information.
If you want to watch Naruto or not watch Pirates, can you tell me in advance when you will return to Naruto? I will come back when I return.