Yearning: the Whole World Is Waiting for My Divorce!

First of all, the main character is too bland. At the beginning, he was cheating on his mother to be a salted fish. This kind of character became as bland as a eunuch in the show. It was too disharmonious. Then, He Jiong and Huang Lei were written as if they were mentally retarded, and Pengpeng basically had no sense of existence. The most basic thing about fan fiction is that you need to know what attracts people when you write it. How many people do you think will be able to accept your fan's work if you come up and make some random changes? It doesn't have to be written according to the original plot. The problem is that there must be a process. If you change it right away, you will lose the sense of substitution. Moreover, the protagonist can do Qinggong, which is a good point. But when the Celestial Master came out, he made two phone calls and messed things up twice and it was over. I just started covering it up and then it broke down. Isn't it the first time you cover it up that you should communicate with the protagonist? Overall, the plot is a bit confusing and misses the point.

It makes people speechless, there is no logic at all!

About the hard-to-find book "Longing for: The whole world is waiting for my divorce!" Chapter 50 The little sheep stands up for Shen Yi! (Please review the flowers) Chapter review.

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