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The plot is bland and unattractive, the writing is average, and the flow has no highlights.

To be honest, this is the most shocking novel I have ever seen. It is the first time I have seen it written like this.

It's actually free, no matter what nonsense it is, I will follow it

The protagonist is Tie Lian*, and your book is really cool. He licks Duan Yu, licks Jiu Zhimo, and gives you exercises, medicine, opportunities, and even less of a wife. Then every time I meet a treasure, I have to read it in public, saying, "This is XX treasure," and then I will be hunted down, and then I will kill him. The protagonist still has cerebral palsy. As long as there is a chance written on the golden finger, no matter what, he will go straight to it. The gatekeepers are better than you. How do you dare to break in? Who gave you the courage? It just depends on the author to write the halo of the protagonist, right? Then why don't you just write that the protagonist picks up a holy place and becomes a saint immediately.

The male protagonist is a smart-aleck fool, a fool

It felt okay at first. After meeting Xue Bing, the protagonist turned on the retarded mode. It was so special.

Pig's feet are so selfish. Neither the sect nor the family has advanced skills. Since pig's feet skills can be synthesized, why can't advanced skills be synthesized for the development of the sect and the family? I have been relying on resources to improve the strength of my family and sect. What will happen after Pig's Feet rises to the top? Are there still so many resources available? No matter how much resources you use, they will be used up.

When did the dragon robe become available? During the Zhou Dynasty, it was the Emperor's Crown Clothing, and during the Qin Shi Huang Dynasty, it was the Black Bird Emperor's Clothing. The true dragon robe costume was only established in the Han Dynasty. Isn't it funny when you pretend to force the protagonist to wear a dragon robe to survive the tribulation? Second, the funniest thing is that the protagonist is pretending to tell stories about himself and people from various eras in history, but there is no real proof of the truth. The audience is shocked and disbelieving at the same time. This happens every time.

Another one who likes pirates. I can only wish that the author and his family are freed from the thieves

There is too much content to discuss, and it doesn't feel like a story-telling novel. Even if you want to explain something, it shouldn't be a long one. Just one or two sentences will be enough. After reading Chapter 11, I feel like I only wrote about three things. Among them, Wu Song passed the exam to be a scholar, and it appeared over and over again many times.

When I saw that the Sunflower Book had the power of bewitching, I lost interest. It was a superfluous setting.

The main character is too young, so I arranged for him to be obsessed with women. It's inappropriate and he's still nosy. He should finish the sword fight immediately and then arrange some adventures.

The writing was nondescript, and he suddenly went to write a novel without any warning!

Chapter 88 The bullet passes through the target and turns into a bullet shell. The author is really good at writing. You are writing about magic, right?

A woman who likes to drink and go to bars must not marry into the house...

I'm afraid your diplomacy skills are not forced to suppress your intelligence. Are those soldiers going out without any brains? The more you look at it, the scarier it becomes, and the more you think about it, the more terrifying it becomes.

The first part of Chapter 400 is okay

The protagonist is too much of a virgin, and I feel that the writing is a bit unrealistic, and some of the storylines are not rigorous enough.

Are you afraid that you are a shemale? You want to use this piece of garbage to **** people?

That's too much. Not to mention the novel chapter, it's also a VIP chapter, **

It's pretty good, but it's a bit messy

Did you drink too much fake wine that you didn't tell me?

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Over 100 points for one chapter, look down on**

I want to see how long I can write.

The more I read, the more I feel something is wrong. I feel like everyone in this book uses genius treasures to forcibly improve their strength. For example, if the master of enlightenment does not have the genius treasure, he may be over a hundred years old by the time the enlightenment is completed. I just think that if the strength is improved by using genius treasures, what is the future? Especially pig's feet. It can be said that all the strength is improved by using genius treasures.

**System, 2b protagonist. I haven't lasted past three chapters

After two hundred chapters, there was basically no Xue Bing anymore. It was already three hundred chapters. But everyone else came, but Xue Bing was still not there. The author must have simply forgotten about the person.

Brother, grandpa has to praise you, your writing is so good.