After Traveling Through Time and Becoming an NPC, I Am More Powerful Than a Famous General!

Advice from a 300-chapter subscriber

When the protagonist was attacked in Dachu City, he disappeared for more than ten chapters. When the city was attacked, the city owner should have received a prompt or something, right? But the protagonist/city lord did not receive any prompt at all. Also, the likes that I have always wanted to win are now dead? If Liuzan died after an upright duel with the male protagonist, then I could accept it. After all, he would either join me or become a stumbling block for me. But I can't accept him being wasted to death by some unimportant generals. Gao Yan, the defender of the city, is also a genius. The biggest advantage of the defender is the city wall! Let the archers stand on the city wall and constantly consume the opponent's soldiers. Although the opponent has siege equipment, can they topple an entire wall? This Gao Yan actually chose to open the city gate and go directly out of the city to fight, completely taking advantage of the city wall. You might as well not build a city wall and save resources. What I'm writing now makes me no longer motivated to pursue it. If you don't agree with my point of view, you can discuss it. Don't say that you can do what you want.

I want to ask a question. Who is Hao Yue? ? ?

Lin Batian, the only player who has cultivated to a second-rate military general by himself, and the protagonist relies on a hundred-fold increase to become a third-rate general. Together, Lin Batian's general talent is higher than the protagonist's hundred-fold increase. There are also newcomers to the game who easily recruit second-rate generals, just like second-rate generals and Chinese cabbage.

Is the chapter content watery? Why do I feel so slow! What does anyone think?

I was also convinced. When I didn't recharge, I could still find two or three good books. After I recharged, I couldn't find any good books anymore. . .

If you go a little slower, I will burst into tears. In fact, the slower you go, the less passionate you are. I originally liked watching the sex, but the farther you go to the back, the slower and slower the sex becomes.

It is said that there are many female protagonists. The protagonists have experienced 17 worlds, which is not that many on average.

Qin Shihuang: Zhao Zheng is also known as Ying Zheng

I suggest you go for more than 200 chapters. The more you read later, the more frustrating it becomes. Wei Chuchu is holding back. I don't understand why a female protagonist who has been holding back is still loyal to her. It's really not discriminatory against women. After all, I am also a woman.

It should be replaced later, you can tell by looking at the chapter names. The first two hundred chapters were originally enjoyable, but after more than two hundred chapters, it will be as frustrating and frustrating as it will poison Shen Nong to death.

I stopped watching when the protagonist became a vassal. How stupid it is to fight for hegemony for one player in troubled times! ! Moreover, Wei Chuchu's weak character also determines that she was originally a flower vase and left the protagonist in troubled times, but could not achieve great success. I think that once you write the content of fighting for hegemony for the sake of friendship, you will lose many readers, because this book is about fighting for hegemony, not a sweet love story! ! !

The front is pretty good. . Then the poison started. . . Only then did I realize that I was not taking the invincible route.

As soon as Shazhu opened his mouth, he helped the Jia family by asking for food for food and meat for meat. What was the point of helping Shazhu without any principles or bottom line? The protagonist licks like this and has crossed a line. Silly Zhu obviously can't look back. He has put up with Silly Zhu and Jia's family so many times. He is really convinced.

The maid is not like a maid, she has no sense of identity.

Like the title, I bet that Chu Chu will sell the protagonist. If I lose, the author will dress up as a woman, and if I win, you will call me daddy.

The heroine is like a fool and the protagonist is a waste

This is really a mixed bag of writing. How good the plot rhythm is in the early stage, but it is so depressing in the later stage. The writing is completely broken, so frustrating! I feel like someone else has replaced it. The writing is so perfunctory that I gave it up and stopped reading. The more I read, the more depressed I became.

How did you persist until hundreds of chapters? I read the comments when I saw more than 100. I still didn't have the book to read but I still couldn't stand it. It was not so good at the beginning. I had skills that were multiplied by several times but I still beat them to death. I looked at them and suppressed them before I could grow up. A third-rate person is divided into several levels. . I can write hundreds of chapters without getting a level up.

This book has been useless since the death of the old general. This book has been very frustrating ever since.

I can't keep up anymore. I update every day, and it's getting less and less every day. I can't stand it anymore. **

Alien beasts shouldn't be found only on Earth, right? Logically speaking, it should be impossible for a visitor to blow up his own planet and completely kill the alien beast. After all, there is a setting of Lucifer, the ancestor of the alien beast, so this explosion should spread the alien beast factor throughout the universe. And you also set that after Noah destroyed the alien beasts on the visitor's planet, there were alien beasts from the universe going to the visitor's planet. Also, there are two sources of Zaki, one is artificial and the other is one with Noah and is the dark side of Noah. Do you plan to write an artificial version or do you plan to set the artificial version of Zaki to be infected by alien beasts and Zaki and become a clone of Zaki. Also, do you plan to write about Lucifer, the ancestor of the alien beasts? I think it is better to write it after all, so that the protagonist can gain enough from coming to this universe and subdue a few people who have the potential to evolve into Ultraman. The potential is not small. After all, the R7 factor is generated by the influence of Noah's light. It can absorb the power of Zaki and Lucifer, and can connect with Noah and harvest part of Noah's light. Maybe he can become a fit person or merge with Noah like Tiga to experience the power of the mysterious Four Olympians.

To be honest, I can accept poison, but I can't accept serial poison.

Don't you know why you're not a time traveler? Why do you really think you are a local character?

Aren't legendary generals awesome? Why is Huang Zhong not a legend? The protagonist is a legend and was brutally tortured. The first part of this book is okay, but the second part of nm is ridiculously poisonous.

I was shocked when I read Chapter 265. It was originally a good article, but after reading it, I felt bad. Isn't this considered a failure?

Good guy, the early stage is okay. Starting from the death of Liu Zan, what are you writing? It's full of nonsense. Is the author Shi Lezhi?

It's not very enjoyable to watch, this heroine is a complete failure

Updates are so slow. The more I watch it, the less I want to watch it and I lose my passion.

This book is not good. I read another book where the main character traveled through time and became an NPC, which was much better than the main character. He is planning to kill the heroine and become the lord? ?