The Journey to Heaven Starts from Mount Hua

What do you want Linghu Chong to do with these few words? ? His wife was insulted and looked motionless. It's like watching a show while your mother is being insulted

After reading the book reviews, I found out that ghostwriters have been criticized horribly. You have found the wrong person. §:з)))∠) But thank you for trying the poison. I don't want to read a chapter. At least this is the case with Feilu's supervisor. I don't really understand it. Anyway, it's okay to criticize. The ghostwriter is taking the blame, pff**

What are you writing? You are making up random word counts to defraud readers of their money. It is extremely shameless!

The real-world female character strategy is too slow. The three teachers spent thousands of chapters before winning one and a half. Eight out of ten female characters that appeared could not keep up with the development of the male protagonist and disappeared directly after appearing a few times. Another one dug a hole and remained silent for thousands of chapters. I suggest that you don't add real-life female characters later if you have nothing to do. I don't know if they are considered heroines or not. The recently added Eternal Inheritors look like heroines, but they are said to have wealthy couples, so I don't know if they are second-hand, and the plot is similar to that of a passerby. I don't know if I am watching it as a heroine or a passerby.

The author's imagination is indeed very good, but unfortunately, how many chapters are there in a simulation? Reality and other simulations are mixed in the middle. It looks too dramatic. It feels like running to eat while taking a poop, and then coming back to poop after eating. This repeats, leaving people speechless.

Trash, others are going to kill you, and the death penalty can be changed to a few months, why don't you eat shit 250

To be honest, the more I look at Feilu's paid chapter page, the more I get more and more confused,??

Recently I want to write about Cai Xukun and Qiao Biluo Is there anyone who has read the novel about the happy life of sex? If so, I will write it.

I just want to say that the protagonist is naive but not crazy.

The theme of the world is always the jungle. It gives people a sense of what you are going to do. So does it make sense to write about other worlds? If you go directly to the prehistoric world, I'm afraid you won't be able to survive. You will be directly trained into the Witch Slayer Sword.

We read part of it and found it pretty good. It's comparable to the quality of ordinary short-form writing from A Dian. Don't say I'm belittling you, what kind of virtue is Aru's book? I believe that anyone who has read the books here will be able to have very clear feelings about it. Anyway, don't be influenced by these guys like you. It's really not easy to find someone in Aru who can write stories seriously. So come on, don't let the rumors here affect you. Just think that these guys are jealous of you and deliberately suppress you.

This book is really frustrating to read

Brother, don't be so stupid about subscribing chapters. A dime is still money. Just write a little bit of Yin Fu Jing, and it's just one chapter.

The previous chapters of the novel are contradictory to each other. In the first chapter, the protagonist gives instructions on the martial arts of the four schools, but in the latter part, the masters of the four schools do not know the protagonist.

Is there Souka Runo and Lusamine Lillie?

The reward is so high, but you don't have a monthly ticket? Fantastic novel…

You can't stand it anymore, you have a barracks, you have money, you don't summon an army, you go straight to conquer the world, not to mention too many, you still have nearly 80 million copper coins left, 800 copper coins for a heavy cavalry with a combat strength of 600,000, how many can you summon? ? In that era, your heavy cavalry, which were armed to the teeth, each had a combat strength of more than sixty, no more, ten thousand. If you put it there, you would be invincible! Even three thousand is an iron wall! As a result, you didn't use any copper coins, and you didn't summon anyone, just grinding away! He has an IQ of 100 and becomes a disciple of Lu Zhi? You said you are famous, you are from a noble family, and Lu Zhi just gave you a bad look, why are you here to become a disciple of Lu Zhi? Six hundred and sixty-six, I'm stunned. Who is reading this book? Shocked me

Why do people who write about Ultraman fandom like to include Lina, Megumi, they are so beautiful, I don't understand (=_=)

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I think it's better to be in Swordsman World all the time

The sentence is too long, the verbosity is boring, and people have no motivation to read on.

The first few chapters gave me the feeling that the previous writing style was very vulgar. I had no passion for reading it, and I felt uncomfortable but couldn't express it. It was uncomfortable!

Your sect only has hundreds of disciples, which is too few. It is still one of the five major sects. There are at least tens of thousands of Mingjiao disciples. As one of the five major sects, you must have at least a thousand.

For example: Dugu Nine Swords? As a keyboard-level unlimited fighting enthusiast, why should I compete with others in swordsmanship? If your inner strength is higher than yours, if you run faster than you, wouldn't it be nice for you to fly to death with a kite? The Lin family was wiped out? Send off the bad guys, buy lime powder, apply poison and concealed weapons, and use kerosene. . Others [Kingjin players still compete with foreign sects obediently? Do you understand the plot of "Golden Pen Washing Hands"?

This book hasn't been updated for a long time. I need a eunuch.

How to say it? I feel like the connection between heaven and humanity is written too heavily.

Commentary on Chapter 119. "The Journey to Heaven and Immortality Begins from Huashan" written by Jing Shuishen. 119. Luck Gathering in Renzu Temple.

Feilu refreshed my outlook on life

**Novel,* shitty author deleted my book review

Big brother, 157 points, the protagonist has 146 points and 8 assists? 8 Assists count as 2 points, which is 16 points...