Da Qin: Yi Xiaochuan Was Castrated in the Beginning!

You look down on Yi Xiaochuan, so why are you not Yi Xiaochuan? He licked Liu Bang, you licked the First Emperor, and even the licks were better than the previous ones! I think this book of yours can be used to film Mythology 2. **Death to someone. Later readers beware! ! The most useless time traveler has to be you!

The protagonist has the nerve to say that Yi Xiaochuan is really a crow laughing at a black pig and almost died laughing. My Yi Xiaochuan was licking Liu Bang and did not give him the elixir. The protagonist planned to give the strengthening elixir given by the future system to Ying Zheng and help him dominate the world for thousands of years. I didn't know but thought Ying Zheng was your father. Even if he is your father, he didn't lick you like that. Do you still want to dedicate your own woman to Ying Zheng, the turtle slave protagonist who is the most annoying?

The title of the book is well written, but I won't write it next time.

I was rewarded with 3 elixirs of immortality. I thought of the First Emperor first. I must be a fool.

The leave-seeking king who thought too much about the characteristics of Hercules wanted to challenge Regichicas alone! Go try dragging it first.

When will I be castrated? Isn't it just a headline-grabber?

The mythical Qin Shihuang. . . Oh, it's hard to describe in one word

According to the performance of Qin Shihuang in the myth, it would be better to wait until Qin Shihuang dies and become the emperor himself

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It's not that Yi Xiaochuan was castrated at the beginning, why didn't you see it?

Another person selling dog meat with a foreign head.

You made me read the book based on your title, but as a result, I never saw what I wanted to read. What was the promised start?

Now that we have traveled through time, why not strive for the highest position? As long as you are not in the highest position, you may be sentenced to death.

Good guy, a school-level officer dares to force a general-level officer, and if you are not old enough, it is impossible to get a general-level officer. If you have a major attack, you will be exempted, and it is impossible to directly transfer you to a general-level officer.

Suddenly, I realized that the Shashao Fruit seems to be a good match for Doflamingo. Fire = Flamingo. It matches very well.

If you want it to be good enough to be put on the shelves, what the hell are you writing about?

Meng Tian said to the First Emperor: "What did the Lord teach me?" ? ? Are you kidding me?

These kind of books want Yi Xiaochuan to be tortured to death, and then he will rebel after Qin Shihuang dies, and then no one will read them in the world, and lick Qin Shihuang just to read them.

It turns out that opening is equal to being on the shelf. The author successfully refreshed my understanding of opening:

Don't write this kind of heroine after her plot is stolen. A little bit excitable. And you, it's really annoying that people keep attacking the heroine.

Doesn't your transformation into a demon look cool at all?

In the past, retreats in the Great Wilderness would last for tens of thousands of yuan, and Journey to the West would always be like making trouble in the Heavenly Palace five hundred years ago.

There are too many inner descriptions of the male protagonist, and the plot advances too slowly. All in all too wordy. We have no interest in hearing the inner drama of the male protagonist. There are too many inner dramas, which leads to a drag on the plot. It always feels like the enemies are far away. I didn't expect that after listening to the inner monologue for a long time, it actually only lasted a few seconds. Anyway, it was too long-winded. It felt like the male protagonist was stunned and giggling, and then everyone around him was stuck.

Update soon. I like reading this kind of novels.

Is the timeline too confusing? Where did the Shichibukai come from if the Pirate King is not dead? Sand Crocodile became the Shichibukai because he challenged Whitebeard without dying. Isn't this from Baidu? . .

Are there so many question marks to make up the word count?

To be honest, your update speed is really amazing.

He's just a hodgepodge and wants to fight with everything, but I haven't seen much use of it.

I have admired three men, one is Xu Xian, the other is Dong Yong, the third is Ning Caichen, one dares to be a snake, one dares to be an immortal, and the last one is not even a ghost. Only after watching Hua Qiangu did I realize that Luo Shi is a real man who dares to fuck a caterpillar. I despise Sun Wukong the most. After he immobilized the seven fairies, he went to steal peaches, but I have to admire Sun Wukong's father. I was so drunk that I was able to get pregnant with a stone. Some people said that I had water experience, but I just slapped them one by one. Aren't you talking nonsense? I didn't know how to upgrade without water before. Now I understand. Anyway, a 50-word sticker can be upgraded. You can also earn experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied this sentence. Reply when posted

Comments on Chapter 2 of "Comprehensive Manga: Starting from Huo Linfei's Crossing the Shield" written by the reader's father, the most handsome one. The neglected junior high school student Huo Linfei.