At the Beginning, There Are 100,000 Unloading Warriors to Evacuate the Ancient City!

How did you end up writing until now?

What's wrong with you, the author, is it the Wanzu or the Zhao family that is more powerful? The Zhao family is so awesome, why not just unify the fantasy world? You can become the leader of all races, but you can't destroy the Zhao family. I really can't imagine how powerful his power is?

So has any girl been fucked?

The main character is written as if he is mentally retarded. . Normal people can't understand

Return to Zhou Xiaoyi, I think you have cerebral palsy

Aren't zongzi zombies?

There are a lot of things written that are unreasonable. Wooden is Wooden and Immortal Human is Immortal. I saw several live broadcasts in which they were so awesome if they got Wooden. Without Immortal, Muden is just like Yamato and does greening. Do you know? I want to hit someone when I read it.

What you wrote grew up too fast. In the blink of an eye, he skipped over the elites, skipped over the gyms, skipped over the quasi-kings, skipped over the kings, and went directly to the legendary elves, and then came the top legends, beyond the top. Growing too fast is not necessarily a good thing. To write a novel you have to learn to write in detail. Now you have already written about the battle of the top legend in just over 70 chapters. What are you going to write next? Will it be over before the 100th chapter? And I dare to believe that the protagonist has already fought in the top level legend. Apart from the real main force of Little Nebula (the one with the Poké Ball), he only has two other dragon-type quasi-gods. Are they not worthy? Only 1/3 of the team has been assembled until now.

The main character is mentally retarded and shameless. The novel has no style and is very boring.

Anyone who messes with you will have their pants dropped.

Those who don't play DNF but watch DNF fans raise their paws

For a cook, no matter what kind of fitter skills you have, you can do all-round sincerity, just to show off. If your main job is a cook, you can do martial arts and medical treatment. At most, you can do chronological treasure appraisal and collection. You can do anything like a fitter.

100,000 Yuling warriors collectively have a curse that looks like eye tattoos

Even if menopause is dug up, there will be no treasure left. Are all 100,000 people self-sufficient? Are you really just a tool?

It feels like most of the protagonists are just a**holes. Fuck, if those protagonists hadn't relied on themselves as time travelers and had system cheats, I'm sure the protagonists wouldn't have survived the first chapter.

Who among 100,000 people dares to challenge you? There are not so many people in those black societies who are 100% loyal.

To be honest, when writing about Yu-Gi-Oh, if you don't want to cheat people, you have to keep changing decks to add novelty. Some have written about both, otherwise it would be too serious. As a competitive film, being too serious will only have a sense of freshness, and once the freshness wears off, it will be boring.

Has the author ever seen a real wild boar? 4 Meters long. Just pretend I haven't seen it before. One meter long wild boar tusks? Author, do you think Ivory?

Today's update isn't enough. Have you eaten the rest?

If the protagonist in your novel hangs out with him, he will starve for nine meals in three days. Other people don't tell the protagonist that he eats meat and at least drinks soup. I don't even have a hair against you.

This grave robber is written too much like a virgin. Do you know what an outlaw is, a tomb robber? Author, you are too naive. If you write this kind of article, I suggest you write about celebrities and idols!

The power setting of your novel is completely poisonous. I looked at your three-dimensional attributes. The strength of an adult is 15 points, and 10,000 attribute points can be exchanged for one point. In other words, the strength of an adult requires 150,000 attribute points. You are really screwed. You can set this adult's strength to 10 points. Also, each point of this three-dimensional spirit requires too many attribute points. The most important thing is that the protagonist's early combat power is completely inconsistent with Zhenlongshou.

I don't feel at ease when people die.

When will it be updated? Why hasn't it been updated yet?

Damn you, don't you know that Honghuang has the highest combat power in all realms?

Blowing the law of time, the law of time is not the most powerful. A truly strong person can ignore time and space.

I have to say this is a waste of Jian Wang San

The staff maker, I said before that I might be able to be promoted to Dragon Controlling Hand, but in the end I couldn't even be promoted to Dragon Subduing Hand, haha

The main character is timid about relationships, which is too annoying

This book is so **! It really took the protagonist to rob a tomb and made him starve for nine meals in three days, and he couldn't even get electric soup or water!