
Yu Ling: My Battle Pets Are All over the Country and the City.
御灵:我的战宠各个倾国倾城
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 510k Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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2.7MReads
15.7kFlowers
10.0 · 1.7kScore
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What does the main character of this book do? It's of no use, it's just getting on the list every day, where is your damn fairy sect? What about apprenticeships? What are you writing about?
Although the subject matter is good, the writing is too casual. There is no outline, just think of where it is. This is a big taboo for new writers, and there is no detailed description. No matter the environment, battles or characters' appearances, the environment is just the name of the place. The battle results are directly written. The characters are simply said to be good-looking. They don't even mention the hair color. Does it contain the gods and demons of Ganxi?
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After a hundred chapters, it really got better. The system became bigger and bigger, but the writing became more and more messy. The previous text did not match the subsequent text. The protagonist had a few extra cheats for no reason. There was no foreshadowing at all. The gold level defeated the emperor, and the king defeated the emperor. The fighting process was inexplicable. There were too many bugs and I couldn't complain.
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