
The Myriad Worlds Merchant Joins the Chat Group
万界商人,加入聊天群
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
524Chapters
5.3MReads
43.9kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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Originally, the last book had no main plot, and you couldn't continue writing. Why is this book still like this? No matter how good or bad you write it, you can write a main plot. I feel like this book can't be finished. It's endless. The protagonist's realm has not moved at all. He can live forever and has no ending at all. In the end, he still cannot escape the fate of entering the palace.
It feels like a chronicle composition written by a child, without even a main story. When I ran to Nightmare Paradise before, I thought there was finally a main story, but I didn't expect that it was gone after a few pictures. Also, are you writing about a businessman or a philanthropist? You can sell whatever the item is worth, without any price difference. Sooner or later you will lose yourself by selling things like this. The protagonist has been wandering outside that world. Usually, it is written about the daily life of those communists. The protagonist is written like a tool man, and there is not much drama. I only wander around a few times when buying and selling things, and usually just brag about his power. You can't write the protagonist in a way that doesn't look like the protagonist. The plot is delayed and there is no main line. It's better to open a store in one world first, and then open a store in ten thousand worlds. At least you can write more than 200 main plots in one world first. You can write more than 200 main plots in one world. It's easy for you to write. We feel comfortable with it. Without a main line, this book is just going east and west. I originally thought that this book would improve, but the result is still the same.
A Tiga who has just woken up can destroy the city with one strike at most, but the highest level is only ninth level? Isn't the protagonist almost the strongest? The seven or eight levels in the middle include the destruction of countries, stars, galaxies, river systems, star fields, single universes, multiverses, and big realms (in a perfect world, for the Immortal King, the universe can be refined at will, and one big realm has many universes), which is unreasonable.
Hahaha, Kakashi masters a thousand ninjutsu, does he have so much money to use? Hahaha
It's such a cheating start, and the more you write about it, the more it becomes worthless!
It's okay to add two-dimensional themes to the chat, but it also adds martial arts stuff, and these themes are in direct conflict. This is as abrupt as adding a three-dimensional person to a beautiful anime picture, and the sense of fragmentation is too strong. I'm afraid not many readers of the previous book will be able to read it.
I don't even dare to read his book "Lost". There is a book about eunuchs. How can I make people feel safe to read the next one? What if there is a eunuch?
Misaka Mikoto's railgun can penetrate the earth at full strength. Do you compare it with the Kage in Naruto??
Cheating is so difficult, I'm not interested anymore←_←
At the beginning of more than one hundred and eighty chapters, the protagonist's character suddenly changed. It's up to you to decide whether someone else has written it or not.