The Rebirth of Red Mansion as Jia Rui

It was a novel read at the beginning, but after one or two hundred chapters, it became meaningless. When it was either filling the cup or on the way to the cup, someone else would mess with the protagonist first, and then the protagonist would show off his power. They were all powerful men of the same level, and others would do it first. Can't pig's feet strike first?

Go on, you actually dare to ask the protagonist to become a sworn sworn brother. If there is a great power discovered in the long river of time, as long as Guan Yu and Zhang Fei are killed, the protagonist will be almost ashes. I really think it is casual to say that he wants to die in the same year, the same month and the same day.

I almost put this book down, it's too watery, Red Mansion is almost gone.

If you kill well, the emperor will be next, give him face, md.

No matter how much this book is praised, the situation is decided. Conniving the Jia family to commit suicide all day long, it's extremely disgusting to watch.

The Prince of Red Mansions is the best one I have ever read in Red Mansions. It is a book that kept me up late at night. The writing is good and the characters are vivid.

Those authors who say that subscriptions are declining are all their own. They clearly wrote well before, but as soon as they were put on the shelves, they dragged down the plot and word count, and said that no one read it.

There is no logic. It is clear that Mrs. Wang is under house arrest, but it is written that it sometimes appears. There are also many plot arrangements that are illogical, and the writing is a bit poor.

This protagonist is too low-spirited, has no ambition, and just lets nature take its course. This is a typical example of the author overpowering the protagonist. He doesn't even have the intention to open a harem, he's such an old coward. Whatever happens, I just let nature take its course and never think about changing anything.

I always feel that this author likes to die at the 300th or 400th chapter. This is true for his first few books. One book became boring after Raven came out, and another one started to become boring after Death came out. Well, I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, I don't want to read anymore after these chapters. It is recommended to read it after Chapter 300**

Not to mention the Lu family, which is a century-old family, even Zhu Yuanzhang, who is a thousand-year-old family, kills whenever he wants. How dare he deal with his most beloved eldest grandson without Zhu Yuanzhang's knowledge? This is how much you want to be exterminated. You are crazy to want to be exterminated.

This novel... Has a nice cover

What kind of ** thing, you spend money to draw a magic weapon, but you still have to spend money to use it, what are you writing about **

There are gods in the Red Mansion. Don't think that an innate master is awesome.

There is a problem with the setting of the first plot world of this book. Surviving thousands of zombie dogs casually means that everything the protagonist experiences is data that can be changed at will. Since plot characters can be created, why do you think that everything about the protagonist belongs to him? So in the same way, maybe the protagonist's memories, including his own, were created by the Lord God?

After being convinced that Jia Rui is so awesome, there are still people who look down on Jia Yuanchun. Isn't Jia Yuanchun's status in the palace supported by his family? The family is not supported by Jia Rui. The villains are written as if they have cerebral palsy. The emperor also granted a marriage. That part is really whimsical.

I'm a pervert and want to see the harem

There was a girl named Zhang Hui, who was 14 years old when she died. She was run over by a truck ten times and died. The murderer is her uncle. She wants people to know about this, please send ten websites. She will repay you by making the person you like like you. If you don't see anything within a month, your parents will die in a car crash, and you will get a terminal disease in a year. Go ahead, I was forced too

When writing a fanfic, at least the character shouldn't be too bad, right? All reduced to the level of idiots,

Zero killed the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist killed a Celestial Dragon, and then made a cruel statement about killing the Celestial Dragon. More than ten years have passed, and it seems that the protagonist has not killed a single Celestial Dragon. The beginning was okay, but the characters got better as the game progressed. In the part about Xiao Zi, I can only say that the protagonist is very conflicted. He likes Xiao Zi and does deliberately hurt her. It's not that she has changed, but that the protagonist has changed. The protagonist is a time traveler. Without knowing the plot, I can't understand this at all.

The more I write, the more I write a sea of ​​nonsense, without a single useful sentence in a chapter, a waste of labor and money!

The protagonist, like a dazed young man, strangled the Supreme Emperor to death in front of the late Emperor and the Emperor. I have to worry about the emperor's face for a while and let a few small buildings go.

Pig's feet took away Xin Dianying, the mother of the famous general Yang Ku

It's pretty cool too, please keep updating

Brother, are you still updating? I just finished reading the main story and I didn't read any of the extras. I actually wrote so many extras.

Commentary on Chapter 488 Sketches of "The Rebirth of Jia Rui in Red Mansions" written by Busan Busan.

The girl threw herself into his arms with a crooked smile, and she was so angry that she really couldn't hold it in anymore.

Commentary on Chapter 28: A slap in the face, a slap in the face, written by Busan Busan in "The Rebirth of Jia Rui in Red Mansions".

Not to mention that the writing is not good. Do you only have four pages in this book? Why can't you get more than ten or twenty chapters? Just write the beginning and start the book

I'll give you everything I can give you (face covering). Those who were rewarded by me in the past for more flowers and tickets were sucked to death. Please don't die. I'm relying on you to make a living.