Wuxia: Disciple of the Canghai Sect

Seeing Yue Lingshan licking the pig's feet with such pleasure, who is such a powerful person? Wei Xiaobao is possessed by him, he is still a powerful person.

I chased three lost books. I had high hopes for this book when I first opened it, but I was still a little disappointed after reading the ending. Generally speaking, the biggest problem is the rate, the background rate of the protagonist before traveling at the beginning, the rate of system settings, the rate of characters, and the rate of plot choices. First of all, the background before time travel is a big problem. I lived too long in my previous life and achieved too much. If it was just a young man who accidentally time traveled, he wouldn't be so criticized at the beginning. The settings of the system are too messy. It changes from martial arts to fairy in one go, and later even uses a body-holding technique to become invincible. It is so different from the style of the whole book that it feels awkward. The character of the protagonist changes too quickly, the middle timeline seems abrupt after skipping, and the hero route has some childish operations from time to time that leave people speechless. The villain arrangement in the early stage was too strong and was suspected of abusing the protagonist. The plot of Iljimae should have ended when Yan Song was defeated. It is a very niche plot and should be shortened as much as possible. The sense of substitution is extremely poor.

Hurry up and complete it. This book you wrote is far worse than the other two.

It is strongly recommended to buy Huang Rong. The first two books by Huang Rong were quite confusing, so they were boring. If you want to see Lost's growth, rq Huang Rong is not easy to write, and the battle of wits and courage is key. The Lost Book is not a traditional cool novel, it is more about logic, so if rq Huang Rong writes it, it is a treasure, but if it is not written well, it will become a pitfall. On the contrary, young Huang Rong is boring and too easy to deceive. Just follow the original story and try it again. My suggestion is to lengthen the relevant plot line. Firstly, it will be easier to deal with, and any accidents can be corrected at any time. Secondly, it should be more difficult to collect the rq. Worldly principles, vision, and feelings for the husband will all become obstacles. You can think of the collection process as a balance, gradually increasing the stakes, and finally overwhelming everything. In this way, there will be no logical problems, and the characters can be brought to life.

Damn it, I said I want to challenge the rules of the world, but I am also killing people at will according to the rules of the world.

When I saw the setting, I didn't want to watch it anymore. Is it innate after the ultimate? Look at Li Mo refunding the money!

The protagonist is either being abused or looking for abuse**

. . This protagonist doesn't look like someone who lived over eighty years in his previous life.

It's better not to write about who he was in his previous life. It looks too awkward. Even if he lives a new life, he won't be able to understand basic common sense. It's not as good as your previous book. This is too awkward.

I haven't read it yet, but it's a pity to kill Wu Xingyun and Li Qiushui after reading the introduction.