At the Beginning, He Took Five Thousand Dead Soldiers and Broke into the Construction Site.

I plan to write about it. . . Some like it!

I think this system should be suitable for the Republic of China.

Asai Makoto, that is, Aso Minoru is obviously a boy. The original work has clearly pointed out why so many authors like that transvestite, isn't it ***?

The low-level peeping and the high-level didn't feel it at all, it's just martial arts.

It's pretty good, but the balance in the card is a bit deliberate.

This kind of subject matter is quite good, but the author is a bit timid. There are so many protagonists who make money in the early stage, and then directly buy arms and go to the Golden Triangle when they have money.

It's weird to take people through time travel. I was a little uncomfortable with having a female protagonist. In the last few pictures, one suddenly came in, and in the end, I took two people through time. Are you afraid that someone will read the book?

I don't understand, why does it have to be the same routine as other books about death? It's either working on Pinduoduo or borrowing money. It's good for so many people to be mercenaries or something like that. It's always been these routines.

Has the author seriously watched One Piece? The sand crocodile can actually be domineering? It's so powerful that it's just like a general.

There are no six realms of reincarnation, why do you recite the mantra for rebirth?

After reading the previous chapter, I checked online and the information is still there. I wanted to buy a Lenovo computer at the time. I checked that it was more expensive than the ones sold overseas. The explanation given at the time was to enhance competitiveness. Now that I think about it, haha.

Author, you are so good at boasting, why do you still have a minimum per capita consumption of 5,000 in a five-star hotel? Have you eaten it? This is exaggerated. Where does the minimum consumption come from or is it still 5,000 per capita?

First, the emotional scene with Peacock Dance was not handled well. It feels like the protagonist can easily win the heart of a woman. Is it possible for Isis to fall in love with someone else so easily? BrThird, there have been a lot of mistakes in the final composition of these recent pictures. For example: I used a hammer to destroy the Red-Eyed Black Blade Dragon in the city. As a result, on the next page, the Black Blade Dragon equipped the Black Steel Dragon to increase its attack power.

I would like to ask if the novel in this article contains poisonous and intellectually destructive elements? Will the male protagonist's strength be suppressed, and will he be decisive in killing? Will the female character get everything, or will she be cuckolded? Will she be given away? Is the adopted girl a procrastinator or an impotent eunuch? Can it be kept updated?

Next time, can you write a book about national brand clothing and say that there are no luxury goods in China? It hurt the hearts of many Chinese people

Zhou Lang's clever plan to calm the world, he lost his wife and defeated his troops, Zhuge Liang was angry with Zhou Yu

How come you can meet class beauties everywhere?

What's going on here? The heroine has been wreaking havoc, so Su Chen won't get angry? ? ? ? What's the difference between your story and those novels about a son-in-law? They all start in a frustrating way. Who can stand this? ? ? ?

This book is so interesting

My personal suggestion to the author is that if the author doesn't know how to write, he can try the three-paragraph writing method. In the first paragraph, it is good to write some small events about the characters, the beginning of the conversation, the desert turning into a forest, etc., But please hurry up and condense the words as much as possible. The characters should be discussed for about two chapters. In the second paragraph, you can write a longer paragraph and write about some of his major events, such as the current attack from the author and the subsequent behavior of wanting to destroy the world. But when writing events, please let the characters interrupt less. Surprises are allowed but please limit them to a small amount, otherwise it will feel a bit watery. The third paragraph, this paragraph depends on the author's writing skills. If you are confident, write more, otherwise less. This paragraph is different from the previous one. It was from other people's perspective, but this paragraph is from the character's own perspective. For example, I don't know where I'm going, I just keep walking. Sometimes I feel like I'm in the desert and then suddenly turn into a virgin forest. Like this,,, the desert turns into a jungle,,, use this different perspective to retell the story, talk about the character's psychology, and sort out the timeline.

The quality of this novel is okay.

I haven't read it yet, so I don't know if there are any poisonous points in this book. If there are any, please tell me.

Why does it look a bit like the book about Jiejiao Qi Luck Transformation?

Lighthouse country is really awkward, America is better

Quick update, too few words to read

I like to read it, as long as it doesn't suck and I keep updating it.

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The eunuch is on the shelves. Isn't it written in vain? I can't understand it.

The author arranged two rituals to awaken the Demonic Eye of Death in the comic world. This was a failure. It should be awakened in the created world, so that every time the small garden is connected to a world, the upper limit of the Demonic Eye will be higher. And the way to awaken is also *, you have to experience death.

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