Pokemon: I Teach Lucario How to Fight

The writing is okay but there are too many bugs. There are spaceships in the game animations. Ash takes a plane to and from the Kalos area. Fangyuan also has a GPS for the Pokémon navigator. Pikachu is called Pikachu, which makes me feel like the author is a cloud (facepalm)

Author: I can't bear the fact that you don't have a keystone for your mega evolution. Chapter 366: You don't even need a megastone. Are you going a little too far?

Does Dawu have such food? He would panic even in a battle. How could a champion-level bastion known as Fang Yuan be abused in a battle with a gym leader using his main force?

The latest few pictures are written in a mess.

I want to say that Shakira has no hands or feet, so there is no need for a heavy step. . . . Could it be that it's jumping??

Can you change Banjiras to Banjirados to make up the word count? It still sounds awkward.

Suicune's reputation has been ruined by One-Ball Superman.

It turns out that 3V3 and 6V6 are free-for-all, aren't they push teams? What kind of novel author's second design is this?

Are you sure you are not Saga's brother? Your book just reminds me of Saga's Bounty Hunter

I've read one, it has a similar beginning, but it's set in Kanto. The elf is Larulus.