The Demon Slaying Platform Has Been Used to Slay Demons for Five Hundred Years, and Finally Reached the Great Sage Qitian.

Are those who write novels now all from Japan? What is Gouhachi Hokage and Japanese comics? I'm convinced.

To brag about great things is a failure

Wen Zhong is the Nine Heavens Ying Yuan Thunder Universal Transformation Heavenly Lord, okay?

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You can trade in all realms, why don't you go and cultivate immortality?

Ah Ru, the character in The Fierce Ghost Out of the Cage, was written in a very annoying way, and the death of so many people had a lot to do with her. Pig's feet felt like he couldn't walk when he saw a woman. I didn't feel that there was a clear main line. The plot arrangement was very clumsy.

Isn't Wen Zhong the Heavenly Lord who is universalized by the sound of thunder from the Nine Heavens?

This book is very useless and outrageous. After the realm of Earthly Immortal becomes Mysterious Immortal, where are the advancements of Heavenly Immortal and True Immortal? Not to mention that Goldfinger doesn't have a novice gift pack, but a tiger monster that killed hundreds of thousands of people didn't reward any merit when it was beheaded. This book is useless.

This book is ridiculously useless. It is obviously the blood of the human race. It has to be mixed with the bastards. The Earth Immortal becomes the Xuan Immortal, and the Golden Immortal becomes the Great Luo Jinxian. In other words, the real fairyland is Xuan Immortal, Golden Immortal, and Da Luo Jinxian. They are just three levels, which is comparable to the nuclear bomb saint.

It's amazing. That green bull is 250,000 years old and has a cultivation level of Daluo Jinxian. The protagonist's 3.7 Million years of cultivation can only advance to the early stage of Xuanxian. It's so awesome.

Chang'e is in charge of Taiyin anyway, so Marshal Tianpeng doesn't know what to do? Go back and pursue Chang'e. The last one was Emperor Jun, who is Marshal Tianpeng, and Chang'e's husband in the ancient times was the great witch Houyi

What? Is there any mistake? If the book friends next door see it, they will think that we are looking down on it. Who can read this little bit? Ten more chapters, ten chapters per person in the comment section! ! !

Ten Thousand Years of Taoism and Daluo... Ten Thousand Years of Cultivating to Daluo It Is Probably OK, But Ten Thousand Years of Taoism Can't It? It's normal to complain, don't complain if you don't like it...

Commentary on Chapter 12: Massive Taoist Practices written by the Ninth General under the Qinglong Seat, "Five Hundred Years of Demon Slaying on the Demon Slaying Platform, and the Great Sage Equaling Heaven".

The protagonist is currently a Golden Immortal. The book says that he is only one step away from Da Luo, so where is the Taiyi Golden Immortal! If you don't design Taiyi Golden Immortal in your book, forget it. The key is that you had it before!

Jinxian goes to Daluo, which is a bit Luo

In Fengyun, he doesn't know how to refine the Blood Bodhi, and he doesn't know any moves to challenge Xiongba. He's just a fool.

Where is Taiyi Jinxian? After Jinxian is Daluo Jinxian?

Author, doesn't the protagonist you write follow the worldly ways? I have to go and kill three corpses

Why do you get something by kneeling down when you have a martial art? There are many novels that love to kneel down and worship so much that you don't need to kneel down and walk. How good is it for the protagonist to kneel down and worship as a person who has a good martial art?

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Commentary on Chapter 30: A Visit to Marshal Tianpeng Mansion, written by the Ninth General under the Qinglong Seat, "Five Hundred Years of Killing Demons at the Demon Slaying Platform, and Killing the Monkey King".

Commentary on Chapter 37: The Great Sage Flood Dragon Demon King, written by the Ninth General under the Qinglong Seat, "Five Hundred Years of Demon Slaying on the Demon Slaying Platform, and the Great Sage Equaling Heaven".

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The plot is also a mess. They laid siege to Shushan without saying anything? Or decent? Are you forced to write for system tasks? Is there any penalty for not completing it? Your modern style is not modern, and ancient prose is not the way of writing ancient prose. Could it be that you just got online and were still writing more than ten years ago? Kindergarten is better than you