
Join the Chat Group with the System
带着系统加入聊天群
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- Completed
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- 1.8M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Novel Fanfiction
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- For men
- Updated
- 3y ago
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- Faloo
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Let Uncle Jiu learn ninjutsu, something that little Japan learned secretly, but you let a Taoist learn it? Your mother exploded?
After reading more than thirty chapters, the logic is not smooth, the priorities are not clear, and the language is mediocre. Parents who have never experienced one day can't forget it for ten years, and they still feel guilty; Yue Bu** went to the palace to steal secret books, met a woman who also sneaked in, and fought to the death, asking Yue Bu** to marry her; Qin Shihuang expanded outwards at all costs, how long, there was no shortage of food in less than a year, and there was no pressure on logistics; there is also the plot of the aunt, how many times have I seen it, and spent hundreds of evolution points to advance There is also Zhao Hui who turned out to be a gift and gave it out, and Zhao Hui, who met once and made it clear that he was not interested, spent dozens of evolution points to get a gift. It took three years to save a few evolution points to give out so many evolution points at once, which is really generous;
I feel that Fei Lu's novels are very interesting at the beginning, but then they become boring after spending money to read them. Or it was The Eunuch, which cost more than 700 yuan in total to read.
I have been reading Fei Lu's novels for so many years, and this is the first time I have seen an author as stupid as you. You can play seven or eight pieces or ten pieces of a piece of music. As a result, you have been promoted to a higher level after me, and you can just practice the questions for me. Are you a waste? Have you never read fantasy novels or something? Well, the Holy Lord of the Holy Lord, then you Holy Lord of the Holy Lord, the Holy Lord of the Holy Lord are nonsense, and here are four or five pictures of the Holy Lord, why don't you write an outline?
I don't want to watch anymore when I see Xiao Yan
Are you kidding me? Beethoven was amazed? But isn't he deaf?
The evolution points clearly stated at the beginning cannot even evolve into pencils, but later they can evolve into pans and water cups.
The development is too fast, pig's feet have been feeding the ** members, like pregnant women, they are brainless in the early stage, but the value points collapse in the later stage. In the early stage, a planet is worth tens of millions, and in the later stage, the entire planet is worth hundreds of thousands. *** Members, the *** members are like a one-man show, all the staff are idiots, the temperament is the same, all the members are holy mothers, they help people unconditionally and give unconditionally, give 100 to get 1, everyone does the loss-making business, and in the later stage, the *** members are upgraded for free for no reason. Fools can see that they have paid wrongly before and after, no one finds out, the *** staff are brainless, it is better not to write a chat**, what is the use of this chat**? Let pig's trotters act as nannies and breastfeed pregnant women, give the benefits of your subordinates to the Communist Party members for free, and give benefits to the Communist Party members in return as little shrimps. Do both the Communist Party members and the pig's feet take it for granted? So brainless
I really looked at Dongfang Bai and Yue Bu**, so I just made up my mind. They don't seem to be able to be together, and let alone Dongfang Bai, who has a strong and independent personality. Not to mention that he has a deep relationship with Ning Zhongze. Don't be too sexy. Those female protagonists have nothing to do with being matched with men. Even if they are OCC, they have to force themselves together. Moreover, this evolutionary cheat seems to be for those prostitutes. This is a piece of shit. It is obviously a novel where the protagonist acts as a prostitute and a matchmaker.
. . . . . It's too fake to be unified at every turn. To put it bluntly, I don't know how long it will take to drive. It's not like I have a plane or can fly.
I feel that this novel is very holy (not a derogatory term). If you die during a mission, you will be resurrected. Doesn't that mean that as long as you join the chat**, you will definitely become a big Luo?
This is a question that I, a pure harem party member, must ask when reading a book... I hope there will be answers.
Let Uncle Jiu learn ninjutsu, haha, **
I'm speechless. What the hell are you seeing Ye Liangchen and Zhao Ritian? It's a waste of time.
The protagonist has no sense of existence and is just a tool in the **. Basically, it is about the world of ** members, so don't waste your time.
Why do we have to write about ninjutsu? Isn't Taoism powerful?
Shokuda's combat power has increased. He doesn't even want to play CP9 even if he is a Kage. Normally, the pirates, except for the Otsutsuki family, can completely crush the Hokage.
When the yang is strong and the yin is weak, give away a daughter? Does the author have any opinions about men and women? What a show, full of gay friends
The protagonist in Chapter 1 starts with a mentally retarded child.
It's developing so fast! But there is a suspicion of stacking boxes! **Friend's cultivation level has improved too quickly!
Does The Legend of the Condor Heroes have a Tyrannosaurus Rex? ? ? Good guys, the Cretaceous version of the Condor Heroes
When you describe a country, you must first describe the country's land area, population, system, technology, bronze, iron, steam, internal combustion engines, etc., And what the country's organizational capabilities are like.
Author, you must be a serious cuckold. For the sake of world peace, love and justice, please let me visit your home and experience life.
When writing a book, I can't distinguish between the main character and the supporting characters. What's the point of writing about Yue Bu**? There's no sense of foil. It's not a story. I don't know what to write about.
Can you add, Hayase Kinue, Tao Tao Mako, Saifee, Michelle, Debbie Luke?
Nowadays, there are actually people who write about perfecting inner strength and mental method without inner strength! ! ! ! ! Not increasing the realm of cultivation? ? ? ? ?
Chapters 92 and 93 are a failure for me. Time travel is just a piece of cake. I just want to talk about the number of words. It is of no use. There is no main plot of the protagonist. There is also a time travel to other worlds. It is neither fish nor fowl, and it is annoying to watch.
It develops too fast, and the more you look at it, the less interesting it becomes.
Write more supporting roles
The timeline of the Divine Eagle is wrong. Yang Guo only lost his arm a year ago and Guo Xiang died.