Tomb Robbery: After Sleeping for Fifty Years at the Beginning, the Fat Man Robbed Him

Damn it, uncle, just call Emperor Xin King Zhou. Zhou is the posthumous title given by the Zhou Dynasty. Also, Qilin is a mythical beast. It's nonsense to write it. If you don't know how to write it, don't write it!

King Zhou is the king of subjugation. Who will build his tomb? There is also a golden Buddha buried in his grave. Even if you travel through time, you can't make it up randomly.

It was good at first, but the scene involving Dove made me feel too uncomfortable. Doflamingo the Flamingo has a strong charisma, and I feel that even if he is not very well-written, he should still be given some respect.

It was said at the beginning that the main character is a time traveler, but in the seventh chapter a main character appears who doesn't know how to eat hot pot. I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer.

There was no concept of Buddha during the reign of King Zhou. Isn't it funny that there was a golden Buddha as a burial object?

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Qilin is actually a ferocious beast, I was dumbfounded.

Author, you should improve your writing skills in the future!

It's getting boring now

The writing in the front was quite good and quite funny, but I guess I have to ghostwrite the rest. The star's style is different, it's amazing!

Was there a golden Buddha in the Western Zhou Dynasty? Are you kidding me?

The protagonist is not a nanny. Is it interesting to protect those people all the time? He is still being squeezed everywhere. With the protagonist's ability, can't he go to the grave by himself? He also has to bring some burdens. I still like the protagonist to be both good and evil, and show him that he is a gentleman.

Just call the male protagonist a bastard

There is no normal logic at all. In the TV series, Ye Yixin is famous for being gentle, but here she is a mean female co-star. There are also various logical flaws that are simply unbearable to look at. Please use your brain to think about the characters and plot when writing. Don't mess around. If nothing else, the plot should be in line with the era.

At this moment I just want to sing a song for you to come back soon

The news published by Feilu News Network just a few days ago has now reached 100,000 words.

It's a drama, the author's writing is poor, and the plot and setting are stupid.

Zhang Zhang is not separated from King Zhou. If you know it, don't keep stressing it. Fatty doesn't say anything. Why is Lao Hu acting like a licker?

Embarrassed, I kicked out of the three-bedroom apartment

Novice, no writing skills at all, writing without using your brain

With your level you should quickly find a job in a factory.

In order to show off, I wrote the whole thing without thinking. In the early 1980s, I used a blood jade worth tens of millions to show off. It was really a retard.

Are you kidding me? Kirin is a ferocious beast.

Brother, how come King Zhou has the blood of dragon? He is the last generation of human emperors, the supreme bloodline of the prehistoric human race. Although it is unknown in ancient times that the emperor was a dragon, I think that for the entire human race, the bloodline of the prehistoric human race should be more noble.

I haven't even figured out the timeline yet. I'm messing around and writing a crappy book. I won't even follow the trend. If you don't know how to write, don't write it.

Is it true that everyone's IQ was forcibly lowered in order to show off the protagonist, and didn't the protagonist come from time travel? Never had hot pot? Then you write that he knows the plot.

Comments on Chapter 150 of "Tomb Robbery: After Sleeping for Fifty Years at the Beginning and Being Stolen by the Fat Man" by Baobao Shangtianbang: Xue Liyang: Brother, is my figure good or not?

Chapter 205: Jiang Chen was imprisoned in a cage by Jude Kao, a chapter review about Baobao Shangtianbang's book "Tomb Robbery: He Slumbered for Fifty Years at the Beginning and Was Stolen by the Fat Man".

Commentary on Chapter 36 of "Tomb Robbery: The Fat Man Robberyed After Fifty Years of Sleeping at the Beginning" written by Baobao Shangtianbang: Amway: That's the Devil's Zone.

Old man. I've given you the monthly pass. Be strong