Water Margin: The Hidden Dragon Takes Flight at Zhu Family Manor

The protagonist looks like a fool

To be honest, I personally think that there are very few good people in Liangshan. They are just thieves who rob families and homes. They are the kind who want to recruit people but have no brains.

After writing, the donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong, it's a mess

The writing is not bad, but it is written about the best modern weapons in ancient times and not to be used. You're fine with one or two. It would be boring if there were too many.

So many things in ancient and modern times are all discussed in a joke

When I was a child, I watched Water Margin and I was a good man. When I grew up, I read Water Margin. The Horse's **Ogre. The Hero of Liangshan is really bad**

The author went to read this book Water Margin

Don't write about high school students. It feels like a middle school student when you write it. The subject matter is interesting, but the writing is not good.

All of them suddenly suddenly broke out. Occupying Liangshan and the three Zhuangzis can completely train the army. Why do you do so much nonsense?

Comments on Chapter 8 of Xuanyuan Gengdu's "Water Margin: The Hidden Dragon Takes Off Zhujiazhuang". Military training should start with running (please comment).