Renzaiyunyin: a Thunderous Fruit at the Beginning

You can fly in the natural system, let alone the Thunder Fruit. You are directly invincible. Even the Flying Thunder God can't catch up. What are you writing about? You have to run away even though you can fly.

You still look down on Elniru, what qualifications do you have? Don't you look at the environment in which Elnilu grew up. You have lived in the era of information explosion, and you have not seen anything better than others. The Devil Fruit in One Piece is like a simplification and realization of the laws of the world. In this way, there will not be two duplicate Devil Fruits. The same Devil Fruit behaves differently in the hands of different people. Except for the characteristics of the fruit itself, everything else is developed by yourself. Don't act like the development route of Devil Fruit is fixed. You can use the skills that others have in the original work, just mess around! Are you using the fruits or are the fruits using you?

I found a problem. Those who travel to the Naruto world will always forcibly improve things in the Pirate World, and those who travel to the Pirate World will always forcibly improve things in the Naruto World! It's interesting!

You are still writing about time travel like this. Hong Yu is still dead, and you don't even know that Nong Yu's mother is Mrs. Liu! A system will send a bunch of martial arts and disappear. Hey~ Let's take a look at a few more pictures...

Author, do you hate society? Why does the protagonist kill everyone on sight? You are simply more like a demon than a demon.

It is not clear that the Time Fruit can only travel to the future but not the past, and it cannot be used on others because this ability can only be used on oneself?

Everyone who travels through Naruto and Pirates wants peace. What kind of peace does the Japanese multiverse need? Isn't it good to be all silky?

After eating the Thunder Fruit, you can't develop new moves and can only use old ones. You can't develop and increase volts. You can't even control lightning and make it go out of control.

Doesn't the author need to check it after writing? Can you see if your chapter title and content are correct? It's such a mess and you don't even check?

Although the third generation allowed Danzo to do so many things and make Konoha so weak, the third generation would not think that he was a bad person. He would think that everything was for Konoha. The third generation's self-hypnosis has always been very good.

So what is the beginning of being reincarnated into Kirigakure?

It made me laugh. Uzumaki Mito's physique, not to mention the tailed beast level, didn't even have the chakra of the Kage level. When Naruto was 12 years old, his chakra was a hundred times that of Kakashi.

Uh... Is this comic serious?

The hook is a bit too big. Using the fruit ability requires physical strength. The starting level is 2 million volts. It is still in the state after practicing with the shadow clone. A genin who just got the forehead protector is GG after dispelling the shadow clone. You are still using the skills like nothing. The reason why Naruto dares to keep using the shadow clone is because of the Uzumaki physique and the nine tails.

There are many talents in Konoha, but there are also many disasters. For every talent in Konoha, the Third Generation Danzo and the others will harm one, so what other talents are there?

When Konoha was unprepared, a quarter of the ninjas were wiped out by lightning. Then the civilians should be almost dead and still dare to start a war? Have you ever watched Naruto? Can we unite with other ninja villages? Hahaha s. B Konoha is weak. If nothing else, Sagakure will definitely bite Konoha like crazy and still cooperate.

It would be fine as long as there is no supervision

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