
Hong Kong Movie: Starting Reward: Bongtianlu
港片:开局奖励通天箓
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2.2M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Faloo
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11.7MReads
63kFlowers
10.0 · 10.6kScore
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You are a weakling, a chicken. Is it a true reflection of you that your father died in front of you?
When your father died, you didn't want to take care of his funeral affairs, so you immediately went to do licking? What do you think, author?
It's such a disgusting plot at the beginning! If you don't like it, then don't do so many things. If you want to accept it, you still write the character in such an annoying way. Or do you think you are a nerd who really likes domineering female CEOs?
It's okay to have a harem, but what the hell are you doing if you're not responsible? Also, is this different from the original? Nt
Either time travel as an orphan, who will see me offering sacrifices to heaven?
The author must kill a wave of woolies and a wave of niggas!
The content and background story of this book is quite good, but one flaw is the protagonist. The protagonist is just a stallion with a lusty skin and no bottom line. The starting system adds the unique skill of Tongtianlu and knows the plot. As a result, he does not practice hard and is very motivated in picking up girls. Dad sacrifices to heaven. Looking back at the sad moment of the protagonist, the protagonist has not changed. I haven't finished it. I have read dozens of chapters and the protagonist is like this. I don't know what will happen next.
This is the ****est novel I've ever come across. It's really written and not a joke.
He was familiar with the plot, let his father die tragically, and then tricked himself into being caught. How many people could write this? I read novels to feel refreshed, not to feel uncomfortable. I write this just to get scolded.
作者是不是根本就没有好好看过假面骑士?人家游戏领域根本就不是exaid世界特有,而是玩家驱动器和故障驱动器系统自带的领域,结果你在里面说,故障驱动器没有领域,没有**呢?你削弱也不带这样没逻辑的削吧?咱就把读者的脑子不当回事按在地上摩擦是吧?
Finally, I felt that the protagonist was a cheating slut and a mentally retarded mother.
You write like a fool, it's so embarrassing
The author is **, what the hell was he writing! ! ! Strength**
**, This protagonist is dumber than a pig. Nongtiaozhu can travel better than him
Waste is waste, and a system is also waste.
Why don't you die on a woman's belly? 1. Why do you want to pick up girls? 2. Since you can practice cultivation, why should you live for women? 3. You are a bitch, 4. Why don't you write a book?
It's really good, but I haven't finished it yet. I'm talented, and I'm a good person. She has fair skin and good looks, long legs and thin waist. She likes to take selfies and is self-conscious about her black stockings.
The time traveler almost allowed the tragedy in the plot to happen. How stupid is this?
Everything else is fine. The key is that I accepted Karen Mok's role and I can't understand who wants the protagonist.
After seeing such a high rating, I thought I had found a good book, but I was disappointed. First of all, I want to say that Goldfinger is quite exciting, but the plot is off-putting. I can't figure out why the author must sacrifice the pig's trotters to heaven. Is it a hindrance to him to be alive? There is also the scene where the female police officer enters the mental hospital. What does the author want to express and must he get it? Lick*lick* Everything in the end? Finally, I want to say that it is too messy to be included in the play.
I'm not interested in seeing Ultron become a god. Is a Mind Stone so powerful? No one else is invincible even with five gems, so a small man-made machine can become so powerful all of a sudden. It really has no logic at all. The protagonist has been seeking death
Nb, can only say nb
Let me put it this way, I haven't read it yet but I think it's a fanfic of Gensokyo so I'll support it.
Come on, come on, come on, I have all the flowers for you today.
It's good to watch. I like to see practitioners of this traditional mythology system.
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