The Story of Uchiha Madara in Type-Moon

What do you think? There are only a few paragraphs in one chapter. I wonder if long paragraphs are a taboo in online articles. If a paragraph is too long, you will lose the desire to read it.

I'm a little speechless at this paragraph. The book is actually good, but the first impression is not very good.

Commentary on Chapter 13: Emiya's Residence, "Those Things About Uchiha Madara in the Moon" written by King Britannia.

Time travelers are boring. Apart from knowing the plot, what's the use? Why can't you think of Madara's own soul traveling through the past to change his ending?

Commentary on Chapter 5: The First Battle of "Those Things About Uchiha Madara in the Moon" written by King Britannia.

I want to ask which one of Pharaoh and Little Sun should be trained at the same time. I heard that they are both very strong, but I just don't know who to train with.

This schedule and segmentation also made me drunk.