After Signing for Five Years, I Saved Susu in Shinhwa

After reading the first few chapters, I don't think Yi Xiaochuan is hypocritical, but the protagonist is really hypocritical.

It's so fake. You kicked Niu Er hundreds of meters away. You don't have any common sense.

Sure enough, even if you are trying to survive, you will never forget to fall in love. I'm tired of watching romance dramas in TV dramas. It's not easy to find novels that don't involve romance but focus on careers. Alas. . .

It's another cliche licking Qin that's not interesting.

I went to other desert islands for more than 500 and started live streaming. It poisoned me to death.

Lu Bu is among men, and Red Rabbit is among horses. Fang Tian draws a halberd to stab his adoptive father!

I would like to ask whether Xu Miaoyun finally married Yan Wang Zhu Di or the protagonist Su Bai. If Zhu Di did not marry the protagonist Su Bai, I would not watch it, because you are giving away your daughter, right? I only watched it because of the good writing and because of Xu Miaoyun, so if Xu Miaoyun did not marry the protagonist Su Bai, there would be a gap in my heart. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it! Thanks!

They don't even fart when receiving benefits, or they just say a few words of gratitude, and then when faced with a choice, they start to scold their mother just because they didn't choose the option that they thought would get the benefits. Do you think a person who picks up the bowl to eat and puts down the bowl to curse his mother like this feels guilty?

Da Qin is the Black Water Dragon Banner!

I have never understood. By not changing history, does it mean all history or the history that Yi Xiaochuan knows? All history will definitely change if someone travels through it. Even if you take a breath, it will also change on a micro level. The history you know is not very principled, right?

Some people say that the First Emperor will not kill heroes, but what if the First Emperor dies? Tell me what to do! Don't always say that I won't offend others unless they offend me! If that's the case, I'll talk to your sister first haha

Tsk tsk, you must be a pervert. It's okay if you like to see married people, but if you still like the transformation of married people, then go to Thailand together. One operation can realize your dream. I was originally going to click on it, but the writing is almost bearable. Fortunately, I took a look at the comments...

It can be considered a high-quality book!

The previous characters started to disappear, add some plot

There is almost no pretense, which is okay, but I always feel that the protagonist hides women, which is not good...

The biggest regret in this drama is (Lu Su)...

I've written so many pictures but I haven't seen anyone take revenge for breaking off the engagement.

There is a book written by a mythology fan, in which the protagonist collects various secret treasures to obtain rewards. Does anyone know the title of the book? Can you tell me that I can't find it?

I watched the World Championship. What's the use of writing down the result of the game without changing at all? Qg played seven games against xq and xq won. Everyone who has watched the World Championship knows that this protagonist has no butterfly effect at all. Qg even let es have zero seals and still got 770?

Those who say that the author is a trumpet trolling people? If you really like JOJO, please catch up to at least 7 movies. I'm not bragging to you, this work is definitely the best JOJO fanfic in Luli so far. Usually I only read this author's works when watching Feilu. Also, a certain Lu has a really bad attitude and loves to troll people. Unlike Moujiang, if the author points out a mistake, he will definitely not criticize it.

Chapter 1: I can finish you off in a quarter of an hour, haha ​​(?????)?? The martial arts skills written are so high, are you overdoing your pretense? A quarter of an hour?

Wait, was there Hua Tuo before the Qin Dynasty?

In ancient times, it was good if potatoes could produce ** kilograms. If you brag, you won't be afraid of being punished by the First Emperor.

It's not like she's a peerless fairy and the Jia family doesn't mind meddling in their own business.

This is not a courtyard novel, this is a fantasy novel. Just write period novels that are more realistic. There is no problem with being a thief, but the problem is what do you mean by dragging people into the small world?

The chatting part takes up too much. Although chatting is the main component of this book, it is still too much. Some boring things can be talked about for a long time. The main plot is pushed too slowly. I didn't expect it to be so watery even after it has been put on the shelves. I suggest that the author appropriately reduce some of the chatting. There are really too many words, and they are all insignificant things.

Commentary on Chapter 2 Luck Lottery System written by Zhenyan "I: Becoming the Lord of the Immortal Court of Great Qin at the Beginning" (please collect it).

I'm sick. The first paragraph of the next chapter repeats the last paragraph of the previous chapter. It's so easy to make money.

A syllogism about science written by "Making up the Cthulhu Mythos at the beginning, San went crazy" 009 The attack of the terrifying human-faced rat (rewards will be added) Chapter review.

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