
People Are Sailing: the Opening Sign and the Breath of the Sun
人在航海:开局签到日之呼吸
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- Completed
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- 2.4M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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I want to read a harem novel about Lao Jiumen - Ghost Blowing Lamp - Tomb Robbery Notes - Sea of Sand - Ting Lei. Don't cut around the timeline. If you have extra time, you can go abroad for archaeological research. Anyway, there are many mysterious places about time. You can also add movies and TV shows, such as King Kong and Anaconda. The Mummy Returns or something like that.
Nine years of compulsory education in vain? There are also some plots in the Chinese text of Journey to the West
When I saw in Chapter 10 that the pirates who wanted to kill my adoptive father and mother were released, I was speechless. What a holy mother**.
I really don't understand why people like this kind of character. When you join the navy, make friends with pirates, cooperate with the revolutionary army, and are hostile to your immediate boss, some people also like this kind of insane character?
I saw Zephyr fighting Doflamingo in more than 50 chapters. Let's not talk about whether Doflamingo could beat Zephyr who was comparable to a general at that time. Doflamingo was already the king at that time. The mineral deposits on a remote island were actually immediately asked to be taken care of by a king himself. This is okay. Doflamingo is the master for his own industry. The Shichibukai is allowed to attack the navy, right? The target of attack is Zefa. Who is Zefa? To put it modestly, it can be said that most of the elites in the navy have to call Zefa teacher. Even the three generals have to give Zefa face. Zefa, who has not yet retired from the navy, can be said to have been coerced by Zefa in the Warring States Period. It is not about strength but influence. With such an influential figure, Doflamingo killed all Zephyr without saying a word. I don't know if the Shichibukai are tired of being treated as such or if their industry no longer needs it, but this mentally retarded plot has made me not have any expectations for the future.
It's embarrassing to say that I don't want to be a pirate or a navy, but then I join the navy in the blink of an eye.
It is entirely the author's imagination, distorting the plot of causal logic. You are inexplicably close to the protagonist of the original work. How did you play with these children as peers in your two lives? The excess of emotions makes people confused. But it's all in vain for people like you who write fan fiction to lick the original characters. To put it bluntly, they are just some hot-headed young people with chuunibyou and a low level of emotional awareness.
What's so interesting about this novel? Do you have to read this one?
The system is a bit ** and the protagonist is a bit weak.
The technical staff of this ** Feilu are **, right? Can this fishing also be classified into a military type area? There are also those One Piece, online games, Lua Lua, etc., All of which are classified into military types.
Can only a first-level nuclear bomb kill the silver boss? I don't know how much life a monster has. You must be a bit mentally retarded.
When I saw the fight scene between the protagonist and Zoro's master, I really wanted to ask the author, are you serious? The health of a normal person is 30. The protagonist's health was 100 at that time. However, when fighting Solo's master, Solo's master was actually repulsed by the protagonist's "powerful power"? ? ? Are you kidding me? Although One Piece does not say whether he is a great swordsman or a swordsman, judging from his performance, he is at least a swordsman. Are you sure that a mere 100 health points can make a swordsman feel powerful? If that's true, then how did the swordsman use the flying slash? Are you sure you can do it without any power other than swordsmanship? Although it is not a general calculation, let me give you an example. 30 Blood is equal to the strength of a healthy adult. Then 100 is the strength of three people. Not to mention pirates. In reality, there are people with three times the strength of normal people. Isn't this just an example to compare with combat strength? Are you sure you are writing logically?
I just saw the plot where Kaido was defeated by the navy, so where is Kaido's filial daughter?
It has the flavor of a comprehensive comic from ten years ago. There used to be many of this type.
The front one can be seen clearly, but the back one is really **
All in water word count. . I skipped more than a dozen chapters and I'm still writing nonsense before I finish.
What kind of mentally retarded plot is Chapter 8?
I vomited, the system gave me a lot of bonuses and buffs, and in the end I almost died together, what top-notch trash
It was originally a low-profile version of One Piece, but later it was an exaggerated version. And has the author really watched One Piece?
Don't know why you feel this way?
He said he didn't want to be in the navy, but he finally got into it.
This kind of person is double-dealing. Resources were provided for another three years. As a result, he became a pirate.
You don't think that the swordsman is very powerful, right? It has to be divided into three realms. The writing must rely on fantasy. There is nothing in a book, there is no daily plot, there is no comedy, there is no comedy, it is just for the strength to push the protagonist to run around, and the characters are written and forgotten.
I think it's pretty good. By the way, is there Master Wuxin, Yue Qiluo Yue Loli?
A piece of incense every day is better than the old eunuch.
What is the difference between the infinite hypnosis in the later stage and the inflatable doll?
Which one is better, thunder or tremor? If it were me, I would choose Thunder
Saitama's strange power is only the product of the Heavenly Way in his world, and is not the result of the so-called training method. In other words, if he travels to other worlds, the blessing of the Heavenly Way on him will be ineffective. There is also no place in the original work of One Punch that Saitama can not be hypnotized. The hypnosis of the Rinnegan Eye only lasts for ** seconds. You must be dreaming.
It's much worse than the shop owner and other articles like this, and it can also deceive customers.
I read a little bit about the author Meng Qi's Family Raised