A Little Constable in the Mortal Realm, a Little Reaper in the Underworld

Although I don't mind the first person, but if it can be divided into paragraphs, you really want to make one chapter a paragraph.

If the introduction didn't contain the word "cigarette", I would have thought it was ancient Chinese.

The writing is very good and attractive. Keep up the hard work and update it every day.

Please subscribe, thank you, thank you very much. I will try my best to write a good and complete story so as not to disappoint readers. If there are any criticisms or areas that need correction, please comment and point them out and I will correct them. My real job is also a police officer. Sometimes I may be a little busier and update less, but I will try my best to ensure the word count and update speed every day.

The first-person and segmentation issues should irritate many veterans.