The Disciple Who Travels Between Worlds

It is the first time for a new author to write a book, and he does not understand many things. I hope everyone can give me more opinions so that the author can correct the problems that arise. In addition, for new books, data is everything. Collections, flowers, evaluation votes, monthly tickets and other things will be refreshed regularly. Everyone will keep it, and I hope you can support it. The cute new author would like to thank all the parents who live in food and clothing.

Why do they all like to write about the three major migrant workers comics? It makes me vomit.

Does it all require a harem? The author only wants to read books where everyone in the harem is happy

In terms of updates alone, this author is truly a model worker.

Alas, Disciple Time Travel Pirate Naruto is, how should I put it, difficult to evaluate. This is as funny as the emperor playing house on ordinary earth

So I don't mind if you thank Honghuang. Even if you write the Zhetian trilogy, Yangshen, Immortality Realm, etc., Try not to write about Honghuang in these well-known fantasy novels. There is really no need to write about Honghuang. You can write it for a template like Hong Fang! It's really ****, even if you blow him up to the highest status, but written according to that template, each realm is like a human being. I really don't see any mystery in it. If you think the red square should be written better, I suggest you write mythology. The highest realm is Daluo, which is omnipotent anyway. A name, as long as you try not to follow the prehistoric template and write it a little better, it will be fine. Also, I will try not to write Pangu's Creation of Heaven. That really has no character. The Pangu's Creation of Heaven in the original myth is really not that much. The awesomeness is basically exaggerated later. The ones that are really strong, if you read the Taoist mythology, it is better than the current novels! The best person to create the world is a powerful original king and so on!!

Try writing a few more chapters. This is my first time watching The Disciple Travels into the World of Animation. The other one I've seen seems to be the strongest villain, so I'll take a look if you write more.

Why don't you stop writing when you write well?

New worlds can be added. *Author

Why is it that time travel is all about soul travel, and my body is not good??? Do authors who like to write about soul-traveling dislike themselves so much in real life? Can you write like cultivating immortals, isn't it good to eliminate impurities? Just like using other people's bodies to fuck your own woman? That's good? I like to be controlled by you people to control my body and have sex with your women. Come and control me quickly. Please, all good people, come quickly.