Anime Crossover: From the Start, I Gain the Bloodline of the Winged Dragon of Ra

The fact that one book is not as good as the other is definitely not caused by reading too much. This is a comparison of the author's own books. One is really inferior to the other.

The protagonist has only been in the dungeon world for a few months, but how many years have passed in the demon world? It's too confusing. It was promised to be non-toxic and non-mineral. .

The first chapter of the opening chapter is such a slap-in-the-face plot. This is the first time I have seen it. No novel even ten years ago could have written such a NT plot.

She has a beautiful personality and a very unique personality, and it feels good to have the bus privately owned.

I didn't expect that there would be such a big reaction. I didn't feel anything when I wrote it, but the impression was very bad. Akeno is a standard harem girl. I couldn't write the feeling of the previous volume. I apologize here and hope you guys don't **. In addition, Baiqiu was fixed by me and I didn't come to watch their plot, so please don't make up your mind.

You write it too slowly. The protagonist's power grows too slowly. To gain the power of a god, you have to be a demigod to compete with a demon king. The protagonist is too weak.

Author, the prequel part of your novel Hakoba is quite bad. You don't even have a clear definition of the realm system, it's vague. Even the realm system is vague, so it's impossible to read this prequel. Moreover, this part of the plot of this nostalgia prequel is also completely speechless. You can just follow the Hakoba anime that is acceptable to the public. There is no need to write a prequel to Hakoba. Because you simply can't write this prequel. You write as you can. As for things you can't grasp, don't write them, as this can easily ruin your entire novel.

Try to write something that others don't write. Don't write about things like Sea of ​​Death and Fire. It's too popular and I've read too many books. I usually just abandon new books that start with Sea of ​​Fire. I've read too many books and I feel like vomiting.

Cool article?????????? A wasteful start, the first chapter will be dead when you get old, no matter what cheats you have later,

After reading 40 chapters, 80% of them are about how charming the protagonist is. Women all over the world are attracted to the protagonist.