Rebirth 80: Start by Collecting Rags!

Don't think about foreshadowing, tension, back and forth, etc. You simply can't write this kind of thing, and this kind of thing has long been withdrawn from the environment. Just do it simply and crudely. The more you think about it, the more poisonous it becomes. You think your writing is great, but your experience is often very different from what you imagined. Chatting about the time traveler and the later time travellers has already explained everything. Almost all your bad reviews now focus on this point, followed by the protagonist's character who prefers Japanese Asashi. When writing a fanfic, don't really write it as a Japanese comic protagonist. The character of a Japanese comic protagonist is generally not very popular. Writing a fanfic protagonist with that kind of mentality is very boring. The second is to write any work, as long as it is not a pornographic drama, you must maintain the uniqueness of the protagonist. This is the core of the core, and the priority is even before you write the first word. Even TV dramas have to have a main point of view, so what's the most unique thing about the protagonist? Isn't it because he is a time traveler? If you add multiple time travellers, or even bring a golden finger, the uniqueness of the protagonist will be gone immediately. Let me give you an example, just like Date A Live. Shido has the ability to seal spirits, and then another person pops up who also has the ability to seal spirits. Even if this person is going to die soon, just ask yourself, should you think about it? This means that Shido is no longer special and his abilities are shared by others. The same problem applies to the time traveler. The protagonist is not special. There are a lot of people in similar situations to him. So what's the point? Do you pay special attention to silver and gold when playing lol?

It can only be said that they are comparable. . Because Garp was once qualified to be an admiral, and Akainu was an admiral and is currently a marshal, both are positioned as the navy's pinnacle combat power. . Unless there is a real fight, the winner will be decided. . Like Akainu, he beat Whitebeard like that from the top, while Whitebeard beats Akainu, but it can't cause much damage to Akainu. . . Don't talk about Whitebeard. . Positioning is the core criterion that reflects strength. No matter what, Whitebeard is also a Yonko. He has the title of the strongest and is defined as a Yonko, which means that he has the corresponding strength. . No matter what the plot requires or his performance is not good, he has the corresponding strength after all. . . . Just like Aokiji, his strength is comparable to Akainu. . After Whitebeard is dead, Akainu can chase a bunch of squad captains away. . Since Akainu is so strong, why was Aokiji held back by the captain? . After all, the plot requires Aokiji to be held back, otherwise how would Whitebeard perform? . No matter how low-key Aokiji's performance is, he's not as good as Akainu, but they are both positioned as admirals, so when it comes to actual strength, they are quite equal.

Haha, I'm laughing so hard that I'm 1.6 Meters tall. My legs are 1.2 Meters tall and my body is 40 centimeters long. I can't even imagine it.

The author didn't come up with an explanation for the article that was written as a gift to a girl, so it seems like it was a gift to a girl.

Before I knew it, I had already charged more than 700 yuan.

The protagonist's previous life was in vain, so he has been so despised by the authorities for decades? Can't the surveillance tamper be detected? The official can't restore it? Not to mention that the protagonist's world is now more technologically advanced. Can't we just write it as mentally retarded? There is also a place where the person who buys paper cannot be found. Aren't you being funny and brainless? Can you please stop ignoring the details? Otherwise, you just keep being the boss behind the scenes. Do you need to repeat it so many times? I wish I could have a chapter full of inner activities? There is only one meaning, to be the big boss behind the scenes. The protagonist's success is because of the novel. According to the author's writing, the official version has long been gone.

Anyway, it's very unpleasant to watch. You can't understand this skill, and there's still a cooldown time. It's very frustrating.

When I was ten years old, I was pulled into the room by an uncle and he took off my pants. I was very scared at the time. With an instant of severe pain, the penis entered my body. Soon the liquid also entered my body. Afterwards, I pulled up my pants and my legs kept shaking. I swear since then. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I will never take another injection! ! ! ! !

Brother, the real situation is that if you make such a huge profit, and in just a few days, a lot of people who sold it to you will definitely come to your door to make trouble, and it will be useless to call the police. If the profit exceeds 100%, some people will take risks, let alone such huge profits.

What the hell? Now Jack, now Yi Xiaochuan. Everyone was stunned and attacked me directly.

Author: Is this imprint of yours physical? The imprint of the ancient saints is that the law of heaven is immortal and the saint is immortal. Shouldn't the protagonist be immortal and not die?

Just read mindless articles to pass the time.

That car in the 1980s was worth 10 million, can you tell me?

Chapter 32, that person is simply a**, Chen Han's death needs an explanation, 666 is so awesome

In fact, the protagonist can also have a Hundred Ghosts Night Walk.

Boss Bao only has a daughter but no son. All the property was eventually divided among his son-in-law.

I read the book from beginning to end, and I still have some unfinished thoughts! Please keep updating!

There are so few comments. Author, do you still update them?

I think it's pretty good. Why don't you write it again?

Is the secret room in the small villa in Chapter 31 that big? The tauren has expanded to 40 meters and is still not crowded!

Pig's feet are always only 19 years old

I've seen you become such a eunuch for so long.

It turns out that in the eyes of rich people, antiques are junk! I thought that the most powerful thing about a cardboard box is breaking through the steel bars! But I want to know how to store so many of them for decades? Waiting for appreciation?

? ? ? I actually saw Yin Wenjiao and Yin Kaishan getting along as a couple! ! ! ! 6Ah

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