Horror Revival: From the Start, I Sign In for the Baleful Lone Star

This novel is quite good. The main and supporting characters have basically above-average IQs, and the setting is pretty good. Why do so many people criticize it? Especially a bunch of trumpets? Also, the protagonist Su Zhengcheng was saved, but the rescue was unsuccessful! It was explained in the article that Su Zhengcheng had no intention of merging before he went to save him, and he fused just as he was about to save him! If you can't see carefully, don't push me too hard! Relatives like Tiansha Lone Star who are destined to die can refer to the movie Death Comes! Also, this is a semi-invincible novel. The protagonist becomes stronger little by little, and every plot is stronger than the current situation. That's enough, okay! If you want to read an invincible novel, let me write one for you: There is a protagonist named Long Aotian. He is an invincible thief. He punches out his cell phone and kills those bastards. From then on, the world is at peace. Complete article!

No reply, my dent is 5cm deep

The protagonist can save people every time, but fails every time. It all depends on the evil star. If it's the role of God's Lonely Star every time, I feel like the author didn't write it well. Obviously there is a long period of time before her father can be saved before fusion, but he has to wait until he is about to fuse. She was already S-level, but she couldn't save her mother from the fire. Also, her classmates could be rescued before they entered the water, but they had to wait until after they entered the water. It would be understandable if it said in the middle what restrictions there were on him coming out of the female body. But without writing it, it feels like it was done deliberately.

Just like the title, I'm too lazy to delete the comment about what the studio is good at, or what the money is, so don't treat everyone as a fool.

Chapter one hundred and eighty is followed by ghostwriting. Stop looking. Poison. The bull's head is not the horse's mouth.

The protagonist wants to save people, but fails to do so, and then writes a lot of fates, which are as pale and feeble as Kong Yiji's "Scholar". Come on, this is the protagonist, can't he even change his fate? Don't say that you can't change your destiny. It's not easy to fool anyone. This thing is just a matter of typing a few keyboards. It just doesn't look good. If a work is not exciting enough at the beginning, there will be no criticism. Only half-eaten dishes with worms will make people crazy.

1. The protagonist written above is almost S-level in strength, and the protagonist can appear at any time. 2. Does the protagonist have a retardation certificate? The system must issue a sign-in task! ! ! Every time he thinks he can be saved and has the strength to save him, the protagonist just stays in space as if he is sick. 3. Every time I say so many big words, I never see any use! ! ! What about strength? Strength is what you need to eat! ! ! 4. Either dead or gone, what's the use of the protagonist? Damn you! ! ! SB

It's very well written, and it's not easy for the author. I hope some people can keep their words in mind.

Reply My protrusion is 10cm

To be honest, the author's writing is not bad, but your plot setting is outrageous. Author, do you want to write a cool article or something else? It doesn't make me happy, it doesn't make me happy, it doesn't move me, it's just outrageous.