A House and a Car from the Start

After reading 7 chapters, I found that the biggest problem is that there is no desire for people to read. I am writing down a running account, and it feels like it is scattered here and there without any connection. I am just talking about the problems I think. The author will delete my comment when he sees it. It will affect other readers of your book. I just posted it to let you know the problem. Do you want to improve it?

I hope everyone will support me, and the humble author is begging online.