
People in Ultra: Become the Dark Galaxy at the Beginning
人在奥特:开局成为黑暗银河
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- Completed
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- 471k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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10.0 · 3.4kScore
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Please, you still don't understand what I mean? You wrote that marriage redemption story, but Rias didn't like Yi Cheng at all? Your prostitution article will definitely include Rias in the future, but you ended up writing a paragraph on the redemption of marriage in this city. How else do you want to accept Rias? If you accept her, Rias will become a brainless girl. If you don't accept her, she will become a bitch. And in a sex-selling novel, you write a male protagonist who is a gentleman without any desire? The male protagonist who has no desire is just like Ruozhi, how can you let people watch it? The family members immediately thought that they were all male thugs? Have you ever read the article you wrote? 7.8 Points is not unreasonable, brother, if you still want to continue to quibble with the theory of your article. Then I won't accompany you anymore. You don't even listen to the readers' opinions, so why don't you just tell us that we are just skipping reading? Please jump and watch? **Why should we jump to read the article? Reflect on your own problems, 7.8 Points. I'm really interested in your topic article. After all, no one has written about DXD first. But what you wrote is indeed a mess. If I were the only one to say so, forget it. See for yourself how many people are talking about your problem. I only advise you to sell pornographic articles and don't write about being a gentleman and having a harem. Then the original male protagonist dies or stays away, and his family members are only women instead of male thugs. You don't even know how to write this article. If you don't like it, who will?
Introduction: Pangu, the Queen of Heaven, did not die. Instead, she was kidnapped by the System Management Association and served as a blood slave to provide blood essence to all system owners in the world...
Is there **hate value after issuing a ban on martial arts? ? A kid from a rich family has 10 points, so the whole martial arts world is equal to 100 kids from a rich family? ? ? ?
Isn't Dark Galaxy just Dark Luge El?
I, Luchi-El, would like to call you the strongest! Isn't Dark Galaxy the same Luchi-El in Ultraman?
Isn't Dark Galaxy just Luigi El?
It's a pity that Tan Xiaolin and Tang Xinyi are not dead
Is the protagonist's name serious? Hey hey hey
I don't understand why people don't want to be zombies! Are zombies handsome?
Do you want to become a sissy Galaxy?
Also, the protagonist sincerely complains about his attitude toward women. Harano and the protagonist have no emotional basis to save their lives. Even if they want to hug the protagonist's thigh later, the result is that they have to give their sincerity directly, and give them all they can get gratitude and admiration. The protagonist is still a harem, but it turns out that the protagonist is like an iron rooster. Whether Cha Chao can make a move in the hands of the protagonist, I don't know what he is hesitating on the protagonist's face?
The twenty-four-character core values shocked me
It was well written in the beginning, but why did it end up forgetting the plot? A twenty-year-old time-traveler completely forgot the plot, and he is not the first-generation Ultraman. If it was the first-generation Ultraman that you said you had forgotten, but you still talked about it, the new-generation Ultraman, you have a stupid mind and you will not say that you have forgotten it after watching it! Later on, Geed, you said you forgot, and you also forgot about Galaxy. Then if you write about X and Orb later, do you also have to forget it? Can't you just say that you haven't seen it? You remember it for a while and then don't remember it. You remember some useless plots, and you forget all the useful plots related to monsters. Isn't it uncomfortable?
Chapter 16 has been revised six times and about one or two thousand words have been deleted. It's too difficult and I can't pass it.
The actor of Mana is really good... Ahem, all LSPs understand it
Isn't the Dark Spark Luchiel?
How about using Taro to brew a potion bar? It would be very interesting. I remember that Luigi El also has many dolls from the Kingdom of Light. Let's brew a whole vat of potion wine together and soak it for two years before changing Ultraman back to his original form.
In Chapter 59, it was obviously wrong. Luigi El turned all the Ultraman in the Kingdom of Light into dolls. The Milky Way has seen Ultra's Father and Ultra's Mother turn into dolls in order to protect Taro.
Let's just change it to this: All Ultra Members Become Girls (Manual Funny)
I feel like that
Sabi won't trick them into signing a contract first and must defeat them.
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Emmm, can you tell me how long the update usually takes?
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