In Satan City, I Snatched Videl from the Start

If you have any opinions, you can put them forward on this floor. I will choose the best, such as training methods, new moves, and even various plots

How much the author likes Vegeta! Where are you bragging and turning into Super Saiyan 3 just by looking at it, with normal combat power stronger than Goku?

Sun Wukong is actually jealous that others have surpassed him. Has the author ever read Dragon Ball? He wrote the Dragon Ball novel without even knowing the character of Sun Wukong. Cell will be reborn after he lost his body. Do you think you are writing about cultivating immortals? You can't practice without a body in Hell. Don't you think it's very problematic to include Broly from the theatrical version in the plot? There's no way the Super version of Broly can be compared to the Broly in the movie, right?

Clinton's 500 million is outrageous and too depressing, right?

What the hell, the school's Videl has a combat power of 139? Even Kame Sennin is not that outrageous? What's more, Bidel can't even use Qi, **139? Big Demon Piccolo should let her be the one

The protagonist has a strange brain circuit and is different from normal people. There are too many loopholes in the book and there are also emotional dramas.

When I am free, I write about Yamucha

As a result, it suddenly reached more than ** Just let the promotion card be used by others. If it is not used by the heroine, it will be used as a lick by the Z warrior*, right?

Beep

Even if you are biased against Sun Wukong, this writing is too tragic. It is very difficult for Sun Wukong to realize his mistake.