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The writing is quite good, but your ambiguous attitude makes people afraid to read it. I read a book about female generals before, and it was said to be a hundred, but in the end, it turned out that she was about to get married, and was raped.

What the hell are you writing? It's fine at the beginning. Doesn't the protagonist have a wife? ? What does it mean to write the plot about which women are written later? The protagonists all have the ability to change the situation, but do nothing. Otherwise, just write scientific articles well and don't bring anything else. I don't understand that these novel writers have a systematic way of writing protagonists. You really deserve it. There are more and more selfish, corrupt people in real life. If you write a novel and write about this kind of thinking, wouldn't it be more uncomfortable for ordinary people if more and more such people become leaders? These novel platforms are so shameless in order to make money, they can still be put on the shelves, and more and more of them are available.

Don't wait until the heroine is beaten by the God of Destruction. I will really die laughing.

I am particularly speechless. As a skill of the gods, even Beerus, the strongest God of Destruction, has not fully mastered it. You can just teach it to someone in a few days. Sun Wukong can do it because of cheating with pig's feet, plus he learned the prototype of the ultimate skill when he was a child (Bobo taught Wukong the movement technique). Doesn't the skill of God have any cards?

Doesn't the heroine have No. 18 And Bulma? I've been following two of your novels

In the third chapter, the protagonist has a system and is so scared that he kills the director and Huang Zhicheng directly. He looks really useless.

Is the island owner a Dragon Ball fan? It seems that the works are all Dragon Ball fan fiction.

Okay, why would you put a female dragon goddess?

**Those who can change the rules will not follow the rules, because they are the rules. Those who have the ability to follow the plot are**. Forgive me for being so straightforward, because the strong make the rules, that's why.

Do you want to get my treasures? Let me hide them in the Dragon Balls. From then on, the Dragon Ball era begins. Please look forward to the funny fantasy drama "Dragon Ball King".

Wang Yidi, don't let Huang Zitao go, just do whatever you want.

When will Melee be written?

King Daquan, are you so familiar with the Archangel?

Can the author write well? Don't just pretend to be cool all day long. It'll make you tired of reading it.

Although Whitebeard's personality is very charming, you directly recognize him as your father, and you write the introduction so confidently. You are very proud to have Whitebeard as your father, and it looks pretty good. . . . . Awkward.

Not bad, tastes great

Commentary on the first chapter of "The Second Dimension Appears, Starting with Kurumi Tokisaki" written by Jiuxing Tianyu.

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