The Onmyoji at the Anime Crossover Shrine

Does anyone else want to read this book? If so, I will continue to write

I feel like the protagonist is still a little weak. Why should I care about their opinions on a small consortium that has no supernatural powers?

The writing style is not very good. I only read ten chapters, but I found that the sentences in each chapter are unclear, like broken sentences. A sentence that should be clearly written is directly turned into a few words, and then some words are omitted that should not be included.

Isn't it Xiaomi? How did you become Xiaoli?

What can I say? The names of the female characters are all spelled wrong, Xiao Mi is written as Xiao Li, and the plot feels a bit watery. She likes the male protagonist inexplicably, and the description is also very problematic.

Don't write about the evil smile. When I saw it, I thought of the crooked-mouthed Dragon King. Annoying.

And you are really an Onmyoji. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Suspect

Why does the author keep writing backwards? It's Tuma Burial, not Tuma Li.

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Commentary on Chapter 2 of "The Onmyoji at the Zongman Shrine" written by Zang Chuanqiushui: The boy at the shrine [Kneeling down to beg for the collection of flowers].