Grand Line: Divine Choice

You don't write about swordsmanship, domineering, and fruit abilities. You have to write about Naruto's abilities. It's really annoying for this kind of subject. The pirate system is also very strong. Besides, when you come to the pirate world, you can just use the abilities of the pirate world. When you go to the pirate world and use the abilities of Naruto, I always feel a little jumpy.

How to say it! From the moment I saw the cover, I was hooked

Emmmm, after killing for a long time, one of the main characters did not die, only some civilians and ninjas who had nothing to do with the plot died. In addition, the main character was a pervert who talked a lot of nonsense, and did not have the evil party style of Accelerator.

I don't understand the timeline. Tezuka was in his second year when Fudomine fought, and Echizen hadn't gone there yet. There were also character issues. Echizen took the initiative to provoke, and Haitang hit someone. Tezuka was frightened and yelled, but it embarrassed me so much.

Starting from the integration of Xianyuan Civilization, I don't know what to write in the back, but it was fine in the front

How come flying came later than heat vision? I remember watching Young Superman before. The sequence was that Clark lifted a car when he was about one year old, then awakened his hearing in high school, then chased the school bus at super speed, awakened to fly while sleeping, and then awakened heat vision while fighting. I can't remember when super defense, clairvoyance, super breathing and super brain were awakened.

It's well written, but it's best to use less words that don't belong to this era. What about Buddha and demon? There are no such words in the Daqin world yet.

You are so awesome that you just updated it for a day and stopped writing it.

Can't natural teeth cure Roger's terminal illness?

The first few chapters were okay, but after the main character, a chess player, was off the field, it became unreadable. You are the creator, that is, God or the Emperor of Heaven. Why do you think you are the co-owner of your own world? The setting is deviated, and there is something wrong with my brain!

I write about all kinds of handsome guys again, including a sissy one

It's a bit beyond the boundaries of the Three Kingdoms, and all kinds of ancient things have come out. Well, as soon as this thing came out, I felt that your Three Kingdoms is not that simple! !

The protagonist's character is affected. MD is like shit

Jun asked that the return date has not yet been announced, it would be a pity if Ruoning died. Smoke cage, cold water, moon cage and sand, the demon king Morgana.

It's embarrassing to force the small world's Hokage to blow

Hard? ? ? I'm bad, are you doing porn? Do it? ? Yellow? Well, that's a problem

The protagonist has no fighting experience, so why did he fight Black Widow so easily for the first time? He was so brainless.

It's a good fanfic, but it has an extra system and a protagonist. This zz chose to forcibly reduce the intelligence. As soon as the protagonist opened his mouth, I knew I was a**.

Is the mature Susanoo only ten meters tall? Brother

It always feels a little too jumpy

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