Elf: Start with a Small World

If you don't understand, just ask. The protagonist didn't even bring a girl whom he was sure was his own woman. Instead, he brought Naz, whom he was not sure about, and half of the protagonist's opportunities along the way were given to her. Later, Naz even wanted to compete with the protagonist. Did you write this kind of plot to ** me?

Does the heroine have Sirona?

The protagonist's cheating can be suppressed, which shows that he is an ordinary person with some foresight without a system.

Cheating and adding krypton gold are no better than other people's krypton gold

The league competition is not over yet

I don't know if you feel it, but this book feels wrong when you read it. The words are inappropriate, the short sentences are uncomfortable, and the sentences don't make sense.

I think this book contains at least 1/20, this time it's the elves' skills.

The alliance conference in the Kanto region is the Quartz Conference, and the alliance conference in the Johto region is the Silver Conference.

Good guy, the protagonist is a novice who has just graduated less than a month ago and plays a competition (city-level area). As a result, even if the protagonist trains a gym-level Kati*, he can only guarantee to enter the top 32. I don't know what else to describe it other than outrageous.

After collecting eight gem medals, I entered the top 32 directly at first, then became the top 64, and then became the top 128. At the beginning, Suicune hatched in two or three days, but it has not hatched after two or three months. Is he inside a dead egg? Is there something wrong with the author's brain?

Kati* has the power of the sun characteristic of p

The girly picture is really nauseating

It's so delayed. I don't know why it took so long.

You had 15 Eevee qualifications in the gym before you got 32 qualifications and you became a king? I didn't use any secret treasures in the middle, okay? Although I know that you can't change these things after time, but I hope that future novels will be more rigorous.

I always feel a bit contradictory while reading this book, but I can't tell what it is.

So, the heroine is a Pokémon?

! A fake corpse? I have remembered this book for a long time.

Lots of typos. The setting and world view are neither fish nor fowl, a fusion world, a bunch of original elven characters, but there are also a bunch of modern ones, it's a mess

Author. . . . Can you please reduce the typos, especially the gender one looks weird?

I've been waiting for about two months.

Katie* doesn't have the power of the sun...

Like that random store where you can buy stuff from Bankai, but it feels like you haven't used it a few times. Also, the protagonist's elf upgrade is a bit slow. Others who have no system are so good. Like the learning machine, I feel that it is not used well. After fighting so many battles from beginning to end, even if you upgrade to the gym, you will need to understand the attribute power. Then, before the gym, you can hang up with six to share experience? You can swap out one for another when it's full, and you don't need to carry them all with you. As long as the protagonist is attached to it, it doesn't matter if his combat power is insubstantial. Wouldn't it be good to fight later? The third thing is that the power of the King of Demons is not that weak. I remember that it seemed to be said before that he could teleport around the world. That should be the case. For things like collecting secret realms, if the protagonist wanted to teleport around the world within a few months, he would have been promoted to a small world and a big world. As a result, he was only in a medium-sized secret realm now. He was too lazy.

It was the first time I saw that the initial elves didn't evolve until Chapter 130.

Dr. Oak has already been told about the dream and the World Tree, so why are you mentioning it again?

I found that some authors who write about elves emphasize that attribute restraint is only useful in the early stage, but useless in the later stage, and then emphasize that the elf attribute, ice attribute, beats the dragon type. It seems that the importance of attribute restraint cannot be shown without using the dragon type.

What a drama! , I was reading Pokémon fan fiction! I don't want to watch fantasy

Has the author not considered opening a new book? I like the special chapter better, it feels more in line with the elf worldview

When Dr. Oki talked about Xiaozhi**, he said, "What is this guy like?" Then the old courtyard talked to the protagonist, and it was you. I don't know, he thought he was the enemy of the protagonist. Did the author talk to your parents in reality and he also talked about you?

Mewtwo is not a level 3 god, he seems to be a level 1 god. Isn't he a dream player?

Are you just a time traveler? A heavenly king will make you dizzy with joy?