I Started as a Beast, and My Fiancée Is Lusamine
开局异兽,未婚妻露莎米奈
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 45k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
22Chapters
1.3MReads
6.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 17
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It's not a game, it's really just four skills?
Another book that languishes in terms of updates.
Four skills**, this is not a turn-based game. Do you really think that a Flaming Ace can defeat everything? Or maybe Charmander evolves into Charizard and can't even catch it. The question in Chapter 1 is also wrong. You can't say that if you have dual attributes, you are no longer a ghost. If you change it to a multiple-choice question, it's almost the same.
I seriously doubt that you are cheating on the word count!
Can you please remove one question from each chapter? The word count is completely low. It was barely tolerable before it was put on the shelves. But after it was put on the shelves, it was completely **.
But can you accommodate Lusamine like this? Otherwise, these past few times can be called **. You have written that you want Tutuyun to be used as a flying tool, so why not use Brother Guihu? , And it's best not to include the specific values of the sprites when writing this. After all, this is not a game.
This book is really not very well written.
Damn it, the success of Chapter 4 made me think wrong
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