A Poor Family's Dad Gets a Cheat

The writing is good, but few people read this category.

Let's not talk about the introduction. Let's just say that your starting point is that you can't even bring it in if you often read cool articles. Change it. Change it to a time traveler or something else. It's better than this.

You wrote this! There is no way to bring people in!

Where are your children? Your child is still there in the first chapter, but the child is not mentioned in the subsequent chapters. When eating, you can't write about your children, only your mother and yourself. Don't children need to eat? If your system doesn't pamper your children, can the system send you things?

Commentary on Chapter 2: Secret Lover in "Poverty-stricken Dads Play Cheats" written by Yang Shengzhang.