A Day in the Life of Fuyuki City

Please, this is really important to the author!

Sorry Yanzu I'm very sorry. I installed a surveillance camera in your house and saw that you were holding a Ramrem in each hand. There was Connor below who wanted to drink milk and eat meat sausage. There was also a tongue that always belonged to an eighteen-year-old girl stirring in her mouth. Yan Lingji and Medusa were wearing very cool clothes and were dancing for you. Hatsune was singing to you. There is also your own Crystal Palace waiting for you outside the door. Reply 666 to let me know you.

People live just for Ilia

This part of Konoha is really a failure.

To sum up, in the Konoha chapter, people want to kill you. You think you are aloof and others are not strong enough to kill you, so you just play there and then forcibly add plots, such as the latest Tsunade plot. It gives people the feeling of being in trouble all the time, as if the author doesn't know what to write. What was your original intention in coming to Konoha? What is your original intention in coming to this world? I feel like I'm not strong enough, so I came here to collect strength... And then what's written in Konoha Village is like a funny person wandering around here, talking about ideals here, and talking about emotions there. Don't collect power when you know the plot of Naruto. In the Konoha chapter, it has always been water. And when someone else wants to kill you, you still think you are great, and you feel the same. Many books are like this, and the previous one is good. Suddenly, the reader's patience is exhausted and the book is placed on the bookshelf without even wanting to open it.

I suggest that it is best to change the Naruto section. At least you have to beat several Kage-level warriors in Konoha to death before you have to make peace. Otherwise, if others want to kill you but don't kill others, this section will lose many readers. Of course, I am just a suggestion.

I just read the previous article. Good guy, the protagonist has been drunk several times without knowing it. Do you want to be so bloody?

Brother, if you don't write about the world of Moi, now half of Feilu's books are about One Piece and Naruto. It makes me sick.

Books like this all talk about living for Illya, but none of them are targeting Illya, they are all liars.

Why do the male protagonists recommend women who are drunk and have sex with each other? The male protagonist still doesn't know. I'm really convinced.