I! Lord of the Earth! After Retirement, the Gods and Demons Revived!

This protagonist doesn't look like he has been the master of the earth for hundreds of millions of years. More like a freshman who just turned 18 and got the strength from *shit luck.

This is not a drama about watching the protagonist at all. Watching other people fight all day long has nothing to do with the protagonist. I suggest you change it.

But being so kind to some mortal girls seems very poisonous. The protagonist is the Lord of the Earth, and can be said to be the ancestor of all living things on the earth. The protagonist will either treat everyone equally, or simply not come forward, sit back and watch those Luo Shen being made into a mess, and then come out to save the situation. Don't be extremely indifferent to those goddesses, witches and the like, while at the same time be nice to those ordinary women.

**It's interesting that Tiamat, the mother goddess, is ranked behind Dehog. I guess I started writing with an outline. There are too many books like Feilu, but I haven't seen a few that I came up with the outline myself.

What can I say, I personally think that the writing is okay, but it is a pity that Mingchao is a controversial game. At least in my case, Mingchao's score is very low, almost the same as the original. Mingshi's speech and Shulin, the overwhelming number of books, are really hard to hold back. As for Ji Yan, I don't comment too much on other people's opinions of him. At least in my case, his score is very low. But it's still higher than skirmishers. My personal opinion of Ji Yan is still a deserter. I can't care about other people's opinions of him. When the game came out, I was planning to play it, but then I found out that it exploded. As a result, the perception is quite bad now, but it doesn't affect my reading of the novel. Hahahaha, come on, the author, the content is still good.

Such an awesome person still likes mortal women, so what does the founder mean if he is with him?

Looking horizontally and vertically, I didn't see anything interesting. The whole story is just a few words, L and J plot.

The plot has a confusing direction and is very sloppy in the later stages. I have always felt that the novel should have multiple main lines, or that the branch lines should play a driving role, but I really don't understand your way of writing it all in one way. As I watched it, I couldn't find the main character. It was hard not to jump because I couldn't find the main character. You say he is a behind-the-scenes person, but he doesn't seem to be one. You say he is an invincible person. He is quite invincible, but there is still a lack of plot in this aspect. The overall feeling is that it drives high and drives low, and the water gets wet as you go to the back. The setting is quite interesting, but I didn't write it clearly.

I have always wondered why all the protagonists are unwilling to believe their parents? The first reaction of all the protagonists when encountering an adventure is not to tell their parents. To be honest, it would be so sad if a person couldn't even believe his parents.

As we reach the middle of this book, we should also consider this issue! I would like to ask if you want to watch it without a female protagonist, or choose a female character as the female protagonist? ! The author of your opinions will focus on your reference, so you can leave a message here. (PS: You have to watch the plot later to tell.)

To be honest, the subject matter is very good, and the Invincible style is real. **The female protagonist is really useless except for being a brainless vase. It is just a forced addition to the drama.

I finished watching it, and it was very bland throughout, with not many explosive plots.

All those in the world who have prehistoric life eventually ascend to the prehistoric realm and become saints. Therefore, the weak prehistoric realm was thought up by 2B, no matter which version of the prehistoric realm it is.

It's not about the industrial system at all, just write about the courtyard.

Is Jinwu cremation serious?

Do you think your title corresponds to the novel chapter? The promised exposure chapter turned out to be nothing but chat and question marks. . .

Comprehensive comics: Loading love games starting from Megumi Kato

The author is really good. Daluo golden immortals are everywhere, but the golden immortals are not as good as *!

I still feel that Donghuang Taiyi is better as a princess than Dongjun Yanfei. For the rest, I guess it's because of the author's greedy concubine.

Comments on Chapter 019 Dong Xiang's Trouble in "I, the Underworld King of Dreamland, Join the Chat Group" written by Bao Jun Azu.

Commentary on Chapter 69 of "Beautiful Comics: Maintaining Health and Becoming Strong, Starting with Snow Mastiff Armor" written by Xin Zai in Toronto.

Comments on Chapter 9 of "The Ninth Prince of the Red Mansion: Accepting Concubines at the Beginning, Jia Yuanchun" written by Daxue last night.

About Fat Pig Racing Elephant's book "The Little Door God in the Ancient World?" The Door to Eternal Life is also a Door" Chapter 15 Yao Ji's departure, Yu Lei's gains! Chapter review.

Comments on Chapter 17 of "Fairy Tail Comprehensive Comic: I Make Commissions in Ten Thousand Realms" written by Ye Mingyu: We didn't say we didn't bother (second update).

Regarding Braised Pork Rice's "Zong Manhua: The Lord of Monster Girls", join the chat group! Chapter 14: Do you ask the tiger if he knows that he is the king of beasts? Chapter review of Jing and Xue Nai's three views shattered.

Commentary on Chapter 15: Gifts from Distinguished Guests, "Siheyuan: Nine Magical Skills Across Four Nine Cities" written by Don't Bother Me a.

Five-star praise, very good, righteous way to come

Comment on Chapter 6 of "Rebirth: From Harvesting Rubles' Wool to a Powerful Tycoon" written by the kicked boss.

Commentary on Chapter 106 Why should labor and management save you in "Conan: I Own a Chinese Restaurant" written by Yandere Xier.