I! Head to the War, the Culprit!

It is best not to miss the championship in the first year or the first two years. You can write about leading the team to the playoffs in the first season, entering the finals in the second season, and finally winning the championship in the third season. This is the best. Also, the protagonist's statistics should not be too exaggerated. Appropriate improvement is the best. After writing about basketball, you can also write other sports articles.

Killing Momonosuke, I have written so many chapters, it is obviously a matter of one sword, it must be water, if the level gap is too big, it will be more clean and neat to get extra points, there is no useful information like this, it is a waste of expressions

Pirates. In the world of humanities, you don't need anything else, as long as Monosuke is dead.

Write less about foreign women. You don't like the male protagonist to interact with foreign women. Don't write about foreign women with such beautiful women in China. They are **.

Chinese martial arts only kills people, not performs them Protagonist: Come, let me show you some real martial arts

Why does every One Piece book say that Peach Usagi is beautiful?

Incompetent people will only complain about heaven and earth, and those who travel through time will be disgraced!

For Aizen, killing and defeating the opponent is secondary. If he breaks the opponent's will and destroys his spirit, it is the main thing. Therefore, the phrase "killing people and killing the heart" is the most suitable for Aizen.

The surprised salamander stabbed the pig's trotter, why did he let her go?

Stop causing trouble to the people in troubled times.

This is not a novel, this is a biography

With your 80 chapters, I feel like you are going to be banned. . . .

**It's almost 20 chapters.** You're really good at playing.

Now I'm dizzy. Any system can say something that will make the host stand at the top of the world.

There is a bug, that is, many people must know about this funeral service in the later stage. Then everyone knows that this kind of scene is fake and only costs money. Moreover, those who want this kind of service themselves want to give themselves a strong past. Now everyone knows that you paid for it, will they still believe it? Even if there is a Kowloon coffin pull-up later, others will still think about how much it cost. It would be better to just set it up so that only dying people can see this service.

Think of yourself as an electric eel. . Also generate electricity

One sword style is enough, double swords are not necessary. The flashy Tai Zhong Er. After accepting the great swordsman's insights, he sharpened his skills, made them his own, and created his own sword moves. What belongs to others is always theirs, otherwise you will just be a copy. I hope the author can consider my suggestions.

Seeing that there are two options to choose from, it pisses me off. What's the point? It's not interesting.

What's the use of having so many abilities? With so much ability and strength, isn't that a bit of a trick? There are so many abilities that cannot be compared to anyone's 50/50. Hawkeye, the great swordsman, and the red-haired swordsman are both 50-50 equal, but in so many abilities they are not as good as the great swordsman's Hawkeye. How useless do you think this protagonist is? Or is the system fake? The author is still being cunning, so it would be better to just write about fruit flow or swordsmanship or taijutsu or something simple. Or the most tricky thing is three-color domineering plus six styles plus swordsmanship plus fruits.

The writing is pretty good, but it's a bit too esoteric. I had to read it carefully before I could understand the general meaning (ノ?`???)ノ?

Rayleigh met the protagonist and asked him if he could cross the membrane? Shouldn't there be a fight? Ace is the son of his captain, so he was captured by the protagonist and handed over to the World Government.

Before he turned around, he was a good boy, but after he turned around, he was a bloodthirsty maniac. The personalities of the characters are so different.

Book review ratings from low to high: Just like when we first met → It's been years since then → A sincere gift → Like an old friend returning → Singing and getting drunk → In recent months, wearing clothes → Young and green → Like the passing of time → Do not complain about separation → Self-knowledge of warmth and coldness → Deep love → Do you know the lover → Flowers blooming on the road → Know who you are with → Deep love will not last long → Wisdom will be hurt

Add Shinomiya Kaguya, please

I don't understand what you zzs are saying about this nb and that nb. Let me ask you what do you call yourself now? Aren't they Han Chinese?

An 18-year-old high school student enters the N without being drafted. Is it funny?

The Celestial Dragons have the Knights of God, so does the protagonist want to form the Thirteen Royal Knights?

Looking at the introduction, this system is more of an intelligence collection and analysis tool, which is very consistent with the scientific system.

The timeline is a bit confusing. It was 24 years at the beginning, but it became 13 years later? ? ?

The author should change the name of the book to Nine-Nine Supreme.