Supernatural: I Become the Green Lotus Sword Immortal from the Start

When you write this, you can't just write about skills. . Li Bai is the Qinglian Sword Immortal after all. . I can't even do it with swordsmanship. Qinglian swordsmanship. All the way up. . Not like Kai. Open up and chop.

1. Li Xin 2. Ukyo Tachibana 3. Brilliance 4. Kay 5. Wang Zhaojun If there is anything else you can add, the one with the most people is the next template.

Author, you should be writing about modern urban supernaturals, right? Why does Chapter 21 look as formal as in ancient times, and looking for Bao Zheng, good officials, etc. Doesn't look like modern people. Modern people shouldn't express themselves like this, right? Moreover, the self-proclaimed words in this chapter are not in line with how modern people should speak, so the author, you are a bit lax in this chapter, so I want to complain when I read it. I also hope that the author can pay attention to similar issues in the future, because the elderly of the older generation should not speak in the ancient or ancient way, right? I think it's okay if you say it's a ghost from one or two hundred years ago talking like this, but if you wrote that she was dead for only three months, she talked like an ancient person and you thought she had been dead for three hundred years. So I hope the author can pay attention to these small details and complain about it. Don't complain. Thank you.

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Actually, I really want to spray it, but I'm at a loss for words.

I'm hesitant to read it. I want to ask, what are the forms of these template abilities that the protagonist obtains? Is it the kind of fantasy and immortality that can gain inheritance and power? Or do you just get the fixed skills in King like the game? So I hope the author can answer, if it is the latter one, I will not read it, because it is boring because it is almost impossible to improve by getting a few fixed damage skills. You can only rely on system upgrades, unlike the other kind of inherited skills, which can improve your strength through your own practice and will not be fixed. For example, if the disciples can teach their apprentices if they inherit the skills, then if it is like a game, I can't think of how to teach it. Is it possible to give a skill book and then shoot it? Besides, this is a modern urban supernatural novel, not a mathematical game novel, so I want to know what kind of model the author is writing about so that I can be sure whether to read it or not. Thank you.

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