Crazy Crime Solving: I Can See the Crime Scene

My girlfriend cheated on me and the married man got pregnant. I chose to forgive and convinced my girlfriend that this is also a life. I love you and am willing to love everything about you. My girlfriend was very moved. Since she didn't have a certificate and was afraid of the negative effects of pregnancy, she quit her job and lived with me. I took good care of the baby for 9 months. On the day the baby was born, I ran away. . .

Sakura's change was too abrupt. .

The author's writing in this type of novel is considered very poor.

It's too procrastinating and retarded. Not only the book, but the main character, supporting characters and the author are all the same.

This book is really brainless, the logic is illogical, the case handling is like child's play, and the protagonist is more like a star. It is really a brainless white text. We are here to read criminal investigation, not pornographic articles.

No evidence is used at all, no evidence is investigated, people are arrested, and cases are closed, all based on one mouth. The criminal investigators are done without any need at all. Can I use some time to write a novel like this? Is it all just for the male protagonist to open his mouth?

A submissive temper feels like a **, brother, we all read novels, not here to suffer. Can't you write better?

Although the previous logic was insufficient and some of the plots were unreasonable, it was still barely readable. However, from the time when Qianshan entered Haicheng, more than 200 chapters, it was ghostwritten. The plot became disjointed, and there was basically no connection between it and the writing. The writing also became extremely poor, and the number of chapters dropped to about a thousand words, which is common for ghostwriting.

Blood Rose, don't do this, author, you know? I find it so embarrassing. When you write like this, you look stupid.

I haven't read it yet. I hope I won't lick the Ancient One and Fury, and there won't be any scenes where the Ancient One discovers the protagonist's identity and then asks the protagonist about his attitude towards the world. Eleven out of 10 Marvel fics have this kind of plot**.

Just like a cool article about picking up girls

Author, your cover must be the Son of God! Not Alicia!

Liang Bing has fallen, and I send you the King of Apocalypse Liang Bing.

No, Chapter 5, why can't I get third-class merit without announcing it to the public?

Why do you feel like the protagonist is recognized by people wherever he goes and writes entertainment articles?

Don't always make others smarter to highlight the protagonist. I said if we don't have a high IQ, why don't we keep writing such scenes? It's so embarrassing. Also, do you know the weight of the first prize? If you give me a first prize, a third prize would be too much. Other places are okay, this type of novel needs to pay attention to logic, requires rigorous and tight logic.

I think Hou Sai Lei still sounds better.

There is no need to continue with these pictures. The old men turned into girls, which reveals the author's delusion. The author just posted his clothes in women's clothes!

There are too many loopholes, and the leader doesn't ask for any evidence? Why would you trust a police officer with a very ordinary relationship? Pure nonsense

No, are you doing criminal investigation? The chain of evidence is insufficient, the logic is inconsistent, and the person is arrested based on direct reasoning.

You tell others that this is a murder case without any evidence. After reading 3 chapters, I feel that it is too intellectual.

The protagonist solves these cases. What officer is he now? How many levels has he been promoted to?

I remember that the combination of Orangutan and Diamond's ultimate moves has a chance to kill in one hit. It should be Diamond's ability.

This app provides a poor reading experience for readers...

The writing is good, and it will always be like this from the beginning, unless you are an old writer. If you persist, you will win.

It would be great if you were on other platforms

Both of them are not unpopular, they are just older.

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